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The Night Sky Comes Alive

The black velvet sky,
with diamond dancing stars.
The full moon,
shining brightly.
Morning awaits,
sun bursting into color.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/8/2023 2:21:00 AM
Such a joyful little gem of a poem Paula, I love it! :) <3
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/8/2023 9:29:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you love my joyful night sky write. Have a blessed/great day writing away............
Date: 10/6/2023 4:00:00 AM
Ahhh!! I like the turn in the end to let us know even after the dark of night morning is always there. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2023 11:26:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my night sky write. The night skies bring the morning sun. Have a blessed/great day writing away............
Date: 10/5/2023 6:23:00 AM
Gorgeous poem Paula! I enjoyed this :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/5/2023 1:00:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my night sky write. Yes, the night skies can be so very pretty. Now writing again after being off the computer for 3 weeks. Have a blessed/great day writing away............
Date: 10/5/2023 6:19:00 AM
Lovely Paula! Debx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/5/2023 12:55:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this night sky write. Night skies be so pretty. Now writing again. I have been off the computer for 3 weeks. Have a blessed/great day writing away............
Date: 10/4/2023 1:45:00 PM
Very pretty Paula, enjoyed
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/5/2023 12:53:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you found this to be very pretty/enjoyed. I love the pretty night sky. I have been off the computer for 3 weeks, now writing again. Have a blessed/great day writing away............
Date: 10/4/2023 1:20:00 PM
The Night Sky Comes Alive ~ Date Written: 10/4/2023
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