The Night of the Dance

The memory, of old, returns again
and tiptoes in like summer rain.....
If I close my eyes, I can feel the night
that wraps me close, beneath the stars

There were sounds of laughter all around
And crowds were milling all about
A saxophone was softly speaking
and Sinatra's voice was crooning, ...pleasing

For with a midnight tolling near
One by one, they drifted home...
Just a few of us, to dance the floor
All sense of time had halted course...

With shoes kicked off, and jackets hung
We couldn't bear the evening's end
Cheek to cheek with you that night
The last sweet dance would soon begin

The music stopped, but we did not
We couldn't break our tight embrace
We couldn't tear ourselves apart
And while we danced in pale moonlight
Our eyes were closed, you kissed my face
This was our own, enchanted place

You held me close, we danced alone
The night was ours to keep....our own
Though not a sound at all we heard
The lonely saxophone droned a tune
The record of Old Blue Eyes crooned
The music had no end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Johnson Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 10:27 PM
Congratulations Carrie. I see that this poem won 8th in the contest. I knew it would be among the winners. Lvoe, Joyce
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September 15, 2010 at 8:50 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Paula's contest.. she cannot finalize still however posted a blog with the poem titles of the winners list... so am looking them up one by one to congratulate.. enjoy luv..
K. Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 12:45 AM
What a very romantic write, Carrie and with Frank Sinatra-- this definitely made this even more wonderful ;) -- enjoyed your take on the dance contest :) -- nikko :)
Knop Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 1:53 PM
Lovely write, Carrie, reminds me of my youth and the good times we had with that music. This is Soup Mail!...just posted two new poems after a while. Have a great week!...Gert:)
Sweetheart Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 9:11 AM
A wonderful piece Carrie and much good luck in Paula's contest ... this one will be a top spot winner... SOUP MAIL...luv..
Strand Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 12:33 AM
Ah memories Carrie ,extra special in a talented poet's pen.Rgds Brian
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 4:29 PM
Your first two verses captured my attention and extended through-out this beautiful lyrical piece. A sure winner for the contest. You are truly talented at any form you write in Carrie. I must put this one in my favorites. Blessings, Connie
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September 5, 2010 at 9:21 AM
BEAUTIFUL,Sweet lady,and tnks for yourconcern,all is ok..tnx so much for caring.
Davis Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 12:14 AM
This poem has terrific rhythm! It's the same talent that pianists use to put soul into their music, and it's the first time, I personally, have seen it capitalized on properly on the soup. And u use it so well! Great write, and thanx for u'r comments.
Walters Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Lovely freeverse with occasional rhyme! Love should be like this- like music without end :) Thank you for a kind comment on my poem- I really appreciate it! Have a great weekend! Hugs, Kris
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September 3, 2010 at 12:14 AM
What a sweet and cool Poem you have sketched where music flows from many directions. Your poem has its own music beside the great music of your old ever green tunes and it flows like an enchanting note. Great write my friend and great entry for the contest. My good wishes for your entry. And many thanks for your priceless comments and best wishes. Sorry for some delay due to reasons. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra .....Carrie Richards.
Johnson Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 9:33 PM
A lovely entry and beautiful memory you have penned here, Carrie. Should win hands down. Love, Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 5:24 PM
owwheee..nice one..no one like old Blue Eyes..this is going to be a winner. BG
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September 2, 2010 at 3:05 PM
Wonderful nostaltic memory of a dance, Carrie. It must have been fun to be on the floor listening to Sinatra and that saxophone. Great entry for the Dance contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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