The Night Is Coming

another sun sets prelude to a starry sky.... the night is coming

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James Fraser

Date: 1/10/2011 2:11:00 PM

Oh to stare at starry skies and marvel at what may pass us by. Heavenly Haiku Robert. Thank you kindly for pointing out my missing r on furry, much appreciated....:)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2011 12:58:00 PM

short and sweet fine form too. Light & Love and thanks for your kind comments

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/3/2011 9:47:00 AM

I love the way you describe the transition from day to a starry sky at night, Robert. As for Mad Magazine, I was a big fan of the publication when I was growing up. Maybe it influenced my writing. If this is for Charles' contest, I wish you success! Have a blessed new year. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2011 7:07:00 AM

Good nature work ...Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by my work...We have Red Cardinals here all winter..With us it has been hard to find the time to do things and also the money for most things are not free..A person can spend easily one-hundred fifty to two-hundred dollars a day going a trip not including a place to spend the night..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2011 10:01:00 PM

A sweet haiku, Robert. Let me check out your other short poem for that one contest!

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 1/2/2011 9:15:00 PM

Starry and amazing. Nice write Robert. Dan C p.s. Thanks for catching that missing R in my "Fighting Words". I have not filled it in with your suggested line, but that would have been a good one! Thanks, again

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/2/2011 8:20:00 PM

Beautiful words Robert.. very uniquely described with great imagery in every line.. good luck in Chaz's contest ... appreciate your special comment on my poetry tonight with luv..

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 1/2/2011 7:53:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Robert... Lay

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/2/2011 5:35:00 PM

Nice images to express your thoughts on the night, Robert