The New Math Doesn'T Add Up

His great idea meets her new sink ~ down the old drain

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/16/2021 11:52:00 AM

I can relate; venus, mars and such.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/16/2021 8:09:00 AM

Sounds like a typical marriage to me GW!! I'm thinking about this, well done!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2021 8:29:00 PM

Great verse, dear poet!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/15/2021 8:45:00 PM

No value added anywhere here ~ Drained. (lol)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/15/2021 10:51:00 AM

So true, Gershon. You have some many strong messages in these three short lines!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/15/2021 4:41:00 PM

Running out to buy DRAN-O now. lol.

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/15/2021 5:25:00 AM

Well said:) All ends up in the sewer man has made of time.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/15/2021 4:41:00 PM

At least sewer workers make pretty good moolah in NYC, or so I hear.