The New Dress

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Sashay Into the room How do you like my dress Daddy said I like the girl best Builder

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2015 9:06:00 PM

enjoyed your cinquain:) *luv p.d.

Josefina Costales

Date: 6/26/2015 5:18:00 PM

cute..I've always loved reading(and writing) cinquains, and this one describes the dress in not so many words but bring the message right on.

Constance La France

Date: 6/24/2015 7:59:00 AM

Sara, this is very sweet, a girl always wants to please father and the right response will make the girl, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, not long ago, my grandma started working in a factory assembly line making clocks during the war and then after the war got an office job, she loved working but never neglected her children . .

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/21/2015 4:49:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/20/2015 5:51:00 AM

Wow!! A very brilliant penned..........A.M.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2015 5:42:00 PM

ahhh, that is very sweet!!