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The New Coolness 1, Tanka

tanka the new coolness resting in the old swing without him gaining courage to rake the leaves the new coolness without him by my side looking ahead facing challenges expecting snow

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2012 10:36:00 AM

A well deserved win for you in the #193 contest. Congratulations Reason. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/5/2012 11:16:00 AM

Congrats on another wonderful win, Reason! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2012 7:30:00 PM

THe new coolness. What a great phrase!! I quite like this one! Big congrats in the contest.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/3/2012 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations Reason xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/2/2012 5:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#193" contest Reason. Love, Carol

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 7/30/2012 4:57:00 AM

Lovely poem - well written. Love the use of snow to foreshadow the troubled times expected- (fortunately snow melts and ushers in sunshine).

David Williams

Date: 7/29/2012 5:54:00 AM

Reason this is outstanding, I love it...David