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The Nature of Silhouettes Or

The Nature of Silhouettes Through opaque darkness, delving in the deep act as to say life’s face we must forget true shadows lurk in silent scenes to keep black image not as bright in silhouette. New blend of varied shades that is unique, catch on an outline of the sky’s sunset. bright brightness can be so ordinary white with black is so extraordinary 5/31/19 Rima Ottava Sponsored by Charles Messina

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Charles Messina

Date: 7/1/2019 7:12:00 AM

Janis, I really liked your poem, however some of the words don't rhyme (act, black & catch) if they do then my apologies. I used rhymezone to check. So sorry for the HM. hugs Charlie

Janis Thompson
Date: 7/1/2019 8:33:00 AM

I understand Charlie. It was a hard task to do. Quite a challenge that others were able to meet. I should have started from scratch. Thanks for the HM. Thanks even more for the explanation. I tried so hard to meet the bar. Blessings, Janis.

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/31/2019 7:26:00 AM

'Tis be a wonderful entry indeed Janis, the best to you indeed--truth be told, if I be the judge of this, you are definitely #1, Aloha William

Janis Thompson
Date: 6/2/2019 2:29:00 PM

Thanks and I appreciate your comments William.