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Whispers dance inside my head Reflections glance at a substance dead Confirmations of my unpoetical pen Only white spaces mirrored back No one has a word to say The mirror tells I should go away The oceans piers toss me deep Into contemplation of my rude upkeep Sheepish sins, bitter gin The naked truth No one reads my scribbles doo Oh how my dribble makes me blue

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Date: 4/3/2017 7:19:00 AM
Oh how I recognize that....
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arthur vaso
Date: 4/6/2017 11:12:00 PM
Its a Scottish thing! LOL
Date: 4/2/2017 7:45:00 PM
I know how you feel...I feel that at times too
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arthur vaso
Date: 4/6/2017 11:12:00 PM
:)
Date: 4/2/2017 11:05:00 AM
Very nice ink
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arthur vaso
Date: 4/6/2017 11:12:00 PM
Thank you so much street cries pleased to meet you
Date: 4/2/2017 12:35:00 AM
I can relate Arthur in fact if you had written about scribbled pooh it could relate to me ... but I do have one or two Jan fans not like the person you depict:-( hugs Jan xx
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arthur vaso
Date: 4/6/2017 11:11:00 PM
As long as you have no echo fans!!!!
Date: 4/1/2017 10:00:00 PM
I can totally relate to this piece Arthur. I think we all judge our own poetry very harshly, possibly because there are so many that shine with their talent at this place. I enjoyed this. Keep your pen flowing black & white. 7 ; )
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arthur vaso
Date: 4/6/2017 11:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie! :)
Date: 4/1/2017 8:18:00 PM
There's a definite contrast between sheep and goats. The picture you chose perfectly depicts the rude and bitter goat in your write. Nice to comment on this one.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 4/11/2017 11:41:00 PM
I have read that sheep go to Heaven, while goats....
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arthur vaso
Date: 4/6/2017 11:09:00 PM
I conny have to agree with you there! Pardon my Scottish accent!