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The Naked Jungle

In taboo’s lagoonSwimming by the moon Ghostly dark dense fearwhile green eyes peer 3/30/2017

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Date: 4/13/2017 4:16:00 PM

Eerie! Good one, John! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

John Beam
Date: 4/13/2017 7:48:00 PM

Thank you, Kim and that is what I was going, for the mystery and beauty of the jungle.

Date: 4/2/2017 7:58:00 PM

I love the mystery in yours, John. WELL DONE.

Date: 4/2/2017 7:37:00 PM

Great imagery in your suspensful jueju John; congratulations on a fine win!~Che :)

John Beam
Date: 4/3/2017 6:46:00 AM

Thanks, Cheryl

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/2/2017 7:38:00 PM

Sorry, I meant to put suspenseful!~Che :)

Date: 4/1/2017 9:42:00 AM

You depict an eerie, suspenseful image, John! Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul