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The Mustard Seed / Matthew 17:20

Perhaps, the world would be a better place for you and me if I helped you, then you helped me, and profit not decreed. If you were sick I’d care for you the golden rule the creed. We’d plant gardens, grow our food, all share when there was need. Mothers, Fathers, daughters, sons, their joys would then exceed the need for filthy lucre the false fostering of greed. There was a time when this was so and profit flowed from deed and kindness was credit given with fulfillment, love freed. The world has grown too big it seems, now all we do is bleed. We bleed the goodness from ourselves by actions and misdeed. Return, I say to times of yore and to your family speed for there is no value in false abundance….just see the mustard seed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/14/2010 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Dane Ann's contest "Projects And Credits" Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2010 6:51:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie on your ent place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/11/2010 4:12:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in Dane Ann's contest with this exceptional write.. I did not even know this contest had been finalized until just now..luv.. so congrats.. TEACH..one I did not win..luv. pupil..
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Date: 7/30/2010 10:48:00 PM
Good one, Deb. Was it for a contest? I took your advice and put my explanation UNDER the poem. That poem just didnt' get too many reads anyway. I hate when that happens. I sometimes post too many poems at the same time. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/30/2010 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment on my poetry ~ I think I must have a very old soul ~ for I love for those times of yor ~ a very good monorhyme you have penned for us ~
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Date: 7/30/2010 3:12:00 PM
enjoyed...you are ok, no need to apologize I should have thought better or longer before I jumped into a poem so quick.
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Date: 7/30/2010 2:06:00 PM
You are so right Deborah. Everything has grown so opulent and unwieldy. Just a few generations ago, everything was so much simpler and we didn't buy anything that we couldn't afford so we didn't buy much. Funny I read that over and over and didn't see that typo. I am having lots of eye trouble. I have another scan on Tuesday next week and then we shall see what is going on, maybe. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/30/2010 8:13:00 AM
Good morning D.G., enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 7/29/2010 3:23:00 PM
way too late for that plea. john
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Date: 7/29/2010 2:50:00 PM
Very good example for your theme for this poem TEACH... must be on the same wavelength... I wrote of Psalm 29 today...it has special significance to me ... this is a classic lesson in Monorhyme.. enjoyed.. with luv..
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Date: 7/29/2010 2:33:00 PM
Hi Deborah Changed it , Yours makes better sense Waiting for your soup what did you think of the content. Cheers
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Date: 7/29/2010 1:56:00 PM
Evening Deborah My guru , Love it favourite line false fostering of greed , why would you want to have more than others you may have it but then you loose the ability to relate it , please will you read hand i would like your expertise please Cheers
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Date: 7/29/2010 8:11:00 AM
What a sordid truth of life you have revealed in this wonderful Poem. Great write my friend telling how the world has changed so quickly with the values of life. Love and best wishes ....Ravindra........D Guzzi
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Date: 7/29/2010 7:21:00 AM
We probably could do more that we are doing..My husband planted a garden this spring and I have not been nor has Doris been able to do very much in the garden and our other daughter has a garden and has had problems within the family with illness and she hurt her neck and has pain so she has not been able to do much either ..We have given away to those that would come and gather vegetables from the garden..Be surprised at people who won't even come get it and yet they need it to feed family.Sara
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