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The Morning and Evening

A morning came to an evening With jasmine in its smile With robins in the tree The evening rose rejoiced Petals were wet in joy It hugged the singing leaves Music unplugged it weaved Taking a blue ball point pen Scarlet poetry it wrote The morning recited the poem Birds were chirping in trees outside They stopped and looked with big eyes How a little morning Blended with the old evening in delight Lighting hundred candles in the room The evening knows it will linger In the images the morning will raise In his cerebral canvas In course of his dealing with Shadows and sunshine

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Date: 11/19/2017 6:03:00 PM
An excellent piece... I enjoyed the read very much... hugs and smiles :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/20/2017 12:35:00 AM
Thank you, Akkina ...
Date: 11/19/2017 12:19:00 AM
Such a Seren poem, Probir, life is wonderful when around loved ones. Great write :-)
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Date: 11/20/2017 12:36:00 AM
Precisely so, Eve ... Thank you ...
Date: 11/17/2017 3:19:00 PM
I agree w/the other talented poetesses/poets ... this is lush, linguistic imagery painted on nature's canvas. Beautiful poetry. Stellar write! Love and joy always.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/18/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Freddie ... My young grandson visited me and spent some quality time with us ... and some hours later the poem I wrote ...
Date: 11/17/2017 8:25:00 AM
I love your imagery! "Jasmine in its smile" is my favorite.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/18/2017 8:23:00 AM
Thanks, Agnes ...
Date: 11/17/2017 6:50:00 AM
Lovely imagination created this poem--kudos for your originality, Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/17/2017 6:53:00 AM
Thank you for enjoying and sending the instant appreciation, Vijay ...

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