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The Moon is Full and I Have Chagall Fever

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I am Anaya is giving me Chagall fever! I hope she enjoys this one! 

 

 

The crescent moon and sunlight consumed by the moon’s fullness. The violin violates the quiet and quaint acquaintance of an eyeful. The cow, with its rudimentary cuds, could only curse the night. The bull will not croon its lullaby; he & his Bessy will not take flight. It’s a circus, peculiar, not meant for sleeping babes in arms. Infants blink black and white; Chagall’s kaleidoscope alarms. The angels halt their silent night chorus to weigh in on Bach. The strum of strings stuck to the ooey-gooey moon ad hoc. A strange night, indeed, with flying fish - I thrice had that dream. Marc and Bella sail over the circus-clouds with weathered extreme. I shall fix upon a romance, most of us stay grounded, perhaps One leg lifts the skirt, and perhaps the armored chap in lapse Of selfishness, shows his shining sword, promises to protect His girlfriend, his bride forevermore with a diamond affect. Marc and Bella don’t look down to see who’s looking up. While couples fight for a win, they won’t give up their loving cup. Exploration of intensity and quadrants, amused in edenic perennial. Chagall’s, are the canvases I would inhabit. It’ll take a millennial.

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Date: 8/28/2024 4:19:00 PM
A dazzling tapestry of Chagall inspired poetry, Kim. Just wonderful. A FAV! :))))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2024 4:35:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gina! I would love to see, in person, some of Chagall’s glorious favorite artwork! I have a couple of Chagall’s (not originals).
Date: 8/27/2024 2:19:00 PM
Interesting work, a lot of lines stand out....as expected ;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2024 3:29:00 PM
Thank you! I had fun writing about my favorite artist!
Date: 8/27/2024 1:41:00 PM
Ha, I'm feeling feverish, Chagall is cool and infectious! I'm all in, Kim. Love it! Have you seen Sun Moon""Firebird"? Gold and rouge breathtaking. awesome Couplets, I enjoyed! hugs~Ty, Anaya ;)
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I Am Anaya
Date: 8/28/2024 3:01:00 PM
I just wrote End of August to the painting Sun Moon, I still have a slight fever, Kimmy lol.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2024 3:32:00 PM
Looked it up! It is breathtaking! Thank you for reading! Hugs
Date: 8/26/2024 7:22:00 PM
Wow Kim you are brilliant!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2024 7:48:00 PM
Thank you, Karen :)
Date: 8/26/2024 4:26:00 PM
I enjoy your poem. The description of this beautiful painting brings to focus it's mystery and magic.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2024 5:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Hilda!
Date: 8/26/2024 11:59:00 AM
I think you are full of Chagall fever.. is there a remedy for your cure? These are great, you did them so well...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2024 12:30:00 PM
I appreciate you, my friend! Thank you!
Date: 8/26/2024 11:31:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your "Fever" write. "Good Luck" be going out to you this day.... Have a wonderful day writing away................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2024 12:31:00 PM
Not for a contest. Just enjoying a free writing day. Thank you, Paula!

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