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The Moon In June

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In the quiescent quietude of a tranquil June night Stood Queen Moon in her diadem with an entourage of handmaids Her shimmering rays like a slithering silvery stream Came down sliding, slanting and crashing Turning the night into one of fluorescent effulgence June.8.2022 ~Placed Seventh~ The Moon in June Poetry Contest Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 6/15/2022 6:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win lady... Blessings

Bill Baker

Date: 6/14/2022 1:36:00 PM

Congrats on the win! my friend. Beautiful poem and picture to match. You word choices were enchanting. I loved the vocabulary chosen, Valsa. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/14/2022 12:08:00 PM

Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. I love it. Today, be blessed with your win...........

Elaine George

Date: 6/13/2022 10:21:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL! Is the only word to describe this poem. A winner for sure.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/13/2022 10:00:00 AM

Back with congratulations Valsa!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2022 12:00:00 AM

Valsa, I loved the way you used your words for the imagery of lines one and two. Also I loved the last line. Gorgeous. Congrats on your win.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/10/2022 2:24:00 AM

This is simply beautiful.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/9/2022 9:09:00 PM

Beautifully penned Valsa - good luck in the contest.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/9/2022 5:01:00 PM

'the entourage of handmaids' intrigues me. Moonbeams and Starshine, Gershon

Michael Tor

Date: 6/9/2022 1:33:00 PM

Valsa the radiant image and conveying words makes this Poetry Outstanding! I love everything about it. It captures you with the words. the imagery, the brightness, the colors. When you add it all up it creates an emotion within you. A favorite for me. God bless you...

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/9/2022 12:17:00 PM

Nice piece of brevity Valsa, good imagery and insightful too. Blessings always,Gordon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/9/2022 8:12:00 AM

Very pretty and nice alliteration!

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/8/2022 7:47:00 PM

Sister moon...St Francis..I love the concept of a feminism universe...good luck!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/8/2022 12:26:00 PM

Incredibly stupendous bite size poem, as lovely a the rising moon. Best for a win.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/8/2022 11:21:00 AM

Enjoyed, although some see only a ball of cheese . . . .Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/8/2022 10:50:00 AM

Lovely as the moon itself Valsa! Wonderful alliteration carrying the vision of the "Queen Moon." So creative to think of the stars as her handmaids. Best wishes for the contest. I think Andrea will love this one for its creativity and brilliant imagery! Blessings dear friend!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/8/2022 7:11:00 AM

No better sight to see on a cloudless night than the full moon in all its glory. Tom

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/8/2022 6:57:00 AM

Gorgeous pictures of stars, wonderfully rendered, using a wide range of excellent words. Best for a win dear friend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/8/2022 5:36:00 AM

Beautiful stellar images--in wonderful vocabulary, brilliantly depicted. Best to you, Valsa.