Valsa George Poet Free verse

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The Moon In June

 In the quiescent quietude of a tranquil June night
Stood Queen Moon in her diadem with an entourage of handmaids
Her shimmering rays like a slithering silvery stream
Came down sliding, slanting and crashing
Turning the night into one of fluorescent effulgence


June.8.2022

~Placed Seventh~

The Moon in June Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

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Paghunda Zahid June 15, 2022 at 6:57 AM Congratulations on your win lady... Blessings

Bill Baker June 14, 2022 at 1:36 PM Congrats on the win! my friend. Beautiful poem and picture to match. You word choices were enchanting. I loved the vocabulary chosen, Valsa. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Paula Goldsmith June 14, 2022 at 12:08 PM Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. I love it. Today, be blessed with your win...........

Elaine George June 13, 2022 at 10:21 PM BEAUTIFUL! Is the only word to describe this poem. A winner for sure.

Sam Kauffman June 13, 2022 at 10:00 AM Back with congratulations Valsa!

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2022 at 12:00 AM Valsa, I loved the way you used your words for the imagery of lines one and two. Also I loved the last line. Gorgeous. Congrats on your win.

Victor Buhagiar June 10, 2022 at 2:24 AM This is simply beautiful.

Caren Krutsinger June 9, 2022 at 9:09 PM Beautifully penned Valsa - good luck in the contest.

Gershon Wolf June 9, 2022 at 5:01 PM 'the entourage of handmaids' intrigues me. Moonbeams and Starshine, Gershon

Michael Tor June 9, 2022 at 1:33 PM Valsa the radiant image and conveying words makes this Poetry Outstanding! I love everything about it. It captures you with the words. the imagery, the brightness, the colors. When you add it all up it creates an emotion within you. A favorite for me. God bless you...

Gordon Mcconnell June 9, 2022 at 12:17 PM Nice piece of brevity Valsa, good imagery and insightful too. Blessings always,Gordon

Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2022 at 8:12 AM Very pretty and nice alliteration!

I Am Anaya June 8, 2022 at 7:47 PM Sister moon...St Francis..I love the concept of a feminism universe...good luck!

Victor Buhagiar June 8, 2022 at 12:26 PM Incredibly stupendous bite size poem, as lovely a the rising moon. Best for a win.

Rico Leffanta June 8, 2022 at 11:21 AM Enjoyed, although some see only a ball of cheese . . . .Aloha!

Sam Kauffman June 8, 2022 at 10:50 AM Lovely as the moon itself Valsa! Wonderful alliteration carrying the vision of the "Queen Moon." So creative to think of the stars as her handmaids. Best wishes for the contest. I think Andrea will love this one for its creativity and brilliant imagery! Blessings dear friend!

Tom Cunningham June 8, 2022 at 7:11 AM No better sight to see on a cloudless night than the full moon in all its glory. Tom

Sotto Poet June 8, 2022 at 6:57 AM Gorgeous pictures of stars, wonderfully rendered, using a wide range of excellent words. Best for a win dear friend.

Vijay Pandit June 8, 2022 at 5:36 AM Beautiful stellar images--in wonderful vocabulary, brilliantly depicted. Best to you, Valsa.