The Moon

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• • • • • • they told her he's become the moon so day by day she gathers d r o p s of him before he f a d e s away

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2023 5:52:00 AM

- Lovely poem ... great shape, Las :) - Congratulations on yuor win :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 6/15/2023 2:13:00 AM

Congratulations great poet cum artist ! Your creativity falls in drops, cooling and soaking us in delight.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/14/2023 9:44:00 AM

"Dropping" back in with congratulations for your win! I loved this creative gem when I first read it and loved it all over again - a sign of good poetry! Blessings my friend!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/7/2023 2:15:00 PM

Love the shape poem Sotto, sad and sentimental droplets of love… Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/7/2023 3:05:00 AM

A great shape to ponder on.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/6/2023 12:38:00 PM

Ahhh!! I enjoyed reading this one and seeing the creative shape. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/6/2023 11:31:00 AM

Very creative work my friend--a splendid display of poetic art.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/6/2023 11:05:00 AM

Lasaad, I love this creative, original gem! Ultimately romantic with a pensive air! Great lesson to gather all of the "drops" we can from those we love while they are with us! This is a fav for me as it is "a drop" from your marvelous poetic heart. Blessings my friend!