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The Moment

I'm coming says rain Thirsty shrubbery restless Overwhelmed I’m lost ______________________________ May 10/2017

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Date: 5/11/2017 1:44:00 AM

The dream of every arid place comes true! Excellent my friend, Probir! My flowers thank you!

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/11/2017 5:45:00 AM

Most welcome dear Friend ... Thank you ...

Date: 5/10/2017 2:12:00 PM

Hello Probir. Your Haiku format is in true form voice and tone. The rain theme makes it very reflective with imagery. Well done.

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/10/2017 9:15:00 PM

You are so nice in your appreciation ... I made it metaphorical ... Thank you ...

Date: 5/10/2017 10:25:00 AM

Hi Probir , great write , I required a glass of water after reading ,It was that good :)))

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/10/2017 9:16:00 PM

Ha ha ha ... Thank you, Niall ...

Date: 5/9/2017 10:37:00 PM

Wait till they can control the weather! Great haiku, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/10/2017 9:17:00 PM

Trying I have been ... thank you ...