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The Mockingbird

My day begins; I start to trill. I’ll imitate the birds in view. I give a chirp, then Whip-poor-will. To mock is what I’m born to do. A mourning dove I chance to see. I soften to a coo coo coo. My talent comes so naturally! To mock is what I’m born to do. Here comes a robin. Tweet tweet tweet. And now an owl. Tu-whit tu-whoo. My repertoire is so complete. To mock is what I’m born to do. Caw caw. I’m teasing like a crow. Tweet tweet, cheep, cheep; cuckoo, cuckoo. I'll give a cluck before I go! To mock is what I’m born to do. July 12, 2019 Pick A Title, Vol 6 - Personification - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Based on title #4

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Date: 7/30/2019 11:23:00 PM
Wonderful again!
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Date: 7/20/2019 11:41:00 AM
Lovely...I'd love to sit and listen to a mockingbird. after reading your poem. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/20/2019 10:58:00 AM
What is fabulous piece, Andrea:-) Enjoyed. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 7/16/2019 7:11:00 PM
Superb. I could take your poem outside and identify all the birds! … See you in the winner's circle with this one. Best always, Gershon
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Date: 7/16/2019 2:17:00 PM
Aren't you knowledgable about bird sounds? Impressive. An utterly cute and fun poem. I was going to do mockingbird also but my pen went on and on as a rooster instead. Cock-a-doodle-doo to you, Mockingbird! love ... CayCay
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Date: 7/15/2019 3:56:00 PM
Are we having fun? It was a fun one to read Andrea. :)
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Date: 7/14/2019 8:15:00 PM
You did great with the theme Andrea...GL in the contest..
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Date: 7/13/2019 6:34:00 AM
Nice mocking, Andrea. It gives me a lift)
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Date: 7/13/2019 4:26:00 AM
Well written personification. Love that line, to mock is what I was born to do. Tom
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Date: 7/13/2019 12:43:00 AM
Nice choice of phrase..."To mock is what I’m born to do." Enjoyed it...
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Date: 7/12/2019 9:31:00 PM
This is great! You seem to be a master of using the repeated line. I bet your villanelles are fabulous!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/14/2019 1:49:00 PM
thanks so much. I really love using the many forms that employ refrains of some sort.
Date: 7/12/2019 7:59:00 PM
G'day Andrea … brought back memories of a friend who had a blackbird living around his. The bird imitated his telephone ringing and it sent him half crazy until he realized it was the resident blackbird. I enjoy nature poems, particularly with birds and yours is typical of your ability Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 7/12/2019 7:31:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, You did a fantastic personification. I was though the " mockingbird" was really speaking. I can't enough, how you excell in various forms. You are such a good writer. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/12/2019 3:32:00 PM
I like birds a lot. Did you see "Life of Birds" on PBS a while back? Nice rhyming. I usually do not rhyme - most modern poets don't. I hope you and yours are well. Please take a look at my latest - I am back on the "soup" again. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/12/2019 10:41:00 AM
what superb rhyme and personification Andrea I haven't even thought of which theme to choose let alone started on a poem - will have to think of a good one as I don't seem to appeal to the sponsor in most contests but I will try again:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/12/2019 10:40:00 AM
Excellent Andrea! I want to try this contest but I just don't think I have the time. My daughter leaves the 15th and I am too busy. : ) xxoo
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