The Mirror Quietly Observes

No problem is a mystery to me, for it sounds fresh,
disrespectful, rude, what happened to you are welcome?
I do not care if it is a problem, do you?

Access your memory banks, when did this begin? Sometime in
the 90’s, I imagine.  A constant reply to ‘thank you’ now.
It is all I can do to keep my composure. 

Sitting here, watching these little waitresses 
walk away, their hair in a little cascade waterfall,
bouncing along their confident backs.   I am stuck on this
1970’s soiled  flocked wall. 

They are lucky I have only eyes, no mouth or nose.   They 
would be shocked to  know what I am thinking for my 
capability for thought rivals  any other gold-encrusted 
wall mirror I have yet to meet.

I retain my composure, as the customers parade past,
staring at me momentarily, to see what parts they are showing.
It is a human habit to glimpse at me once, swiftly look away, and 
take a quick peek back into my soul.

It might be a breach of etiquette, but I readily peek back, 
with zealous interest. Uh-oh, here comes the owner 
of this Pizza place,  he is with his current dalliance.  
He thinks he has influence over his employees,
as they transform into highly engaging beings 
upon his every once in a while arrival.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kiser Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 3:09 PM
Very unique, a little creepy considering that the mirror has a mind of its own...(maybe that's why I hate dressing rooms?) Oh well, fascinating piece of work...as I said before...when are you going to write a book?
Krutsinger Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 8:56 PM
I am so busy meeting my daily poem quota, a book will have to wait until my children are sitting around at the bonfire thinking "man, we should have saved some of those. And they can put it together. I despise organizing stuff, and I hate paperwork.HATE it!
Wolf Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 9:52 PM
Fascinating! --Not at all. Intriguing! -- Don't mention it. Unusual! -- Anytime. So Creative! -- No problem... What can you do?! The language refuses to be boxed in... You're welcome! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 10:10 PM
Thank you. I love personification. I think it is when my true self comes out in full force.
Mcferran Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 4:20 AM
As one who is always curious to find a new perspective on human behavior... this poem was right down my alley! ;) Thoroughly enjoyed this- very well done!!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Thank you. It started out as a gripe against "no problem" rather than "you are welcome" which is what I have always preferred,but the BORING-ness of it forced me to try to make it into a personification, and I thought "Don't all mama-pop pizza parlours have at least one mirror?"
Blown Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 3:37 AM
sounds like a twilight zone episode... people see what they want to see but the mirror sees all...excellente'
Krutsinger Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Yes, and as the mirror, I am seeing and unfortunately, pretty much believing too.
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