The Metaphor of My Face

my face was as  s c a r r e d  as my soul -
my once silky-smooth skin turned worn and rough,
years of weather bellowed each fiber;
lines curve down my cheeks from laughter,
and spots of age settled above my brow-
(for getting older has its price)

the metaphor of my face became my obsession-
glass never reflected what i hoped,
never gave enough time for wounds to heal;
hope  s h a t t e r e d  beneath my feet,
the same feet that once gave me freedom...
and i am left staring into
a zenith of stars 
fall
    ing
as they try to rescue me
             ~from MY mirror~

like a magnet i was drawn to insecurity

then the crippling fear i finally shook-
the scars mended with peace of mind,
faded into a myriad of self-assurance

                  ~~~~

a  w i l t e d  face can be renewed;
my skin no longer supple
and
hasn’t been toned for years
but
each line has meaning,
tells an endless tale-
a tale of LOSS
and
a tale of LOVE

______________________________________


Written: 12.22.19
Judged: 1.7.20
N-A rerun 5 Poetry Contest
John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Watt Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 10:08 PM
I loved this write, Laura. I just turned 60, and I find that aging softens a lot of hardness and files down a lot of sharp edges. Though more gray and wrinkled, and less agile, I have more confidence, for compassion, more contentment, and more focus to pursue the dreams I want to pursue. The scars are chapters in my biography that remind me I am strong enough to overcome setbacks. The lines in my face are either from laughing, or worrying about people I truly cared about. Life is good. Hugs...
Allison Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 4:25 PM
a metaphorical masterpiece Luloo. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful Second Placement Luloo! Your ending is superb! xxoo
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 6:35 AM
I agree totally w/Christ ... an elegant, graceful movement of thought, LL! Gorgeous metaphorical expressions. Pure poetry in muse motion. May love light your path in life always.
Scars Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 12:10 PM
aww thank you dear Freddie- may your day be full of laughter and joy- Blessings from across the miles x:-)-luloo
Green Avatar
December 23, 2019 at 9:18 AM
Beautifully done Luloo. That last stanza says it all. Best wishes in the contest.
Scars Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 12:09 PM
thank you dear Chris! x:-)-luloo
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