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The Metaphor of My Face

my face was as s c a r r e d as my soul - my once silky-smooth skin turned worn and rough, years of weather bellowed each fiber; lines curve down my cheeks from laughter, and spots of age settled above my brow- (for getting older has its price) the metaphor of my face became my obsession- glass never reflected what i hoped, never gave enough time for wounds to heal; hope s h a t t e r e d beneath my feet, the same feet that once gave me freedom... and i am left staring into a zenith of stars fall ing as they try to rescue me ~from MY mirror~ like a magnet i was drawn to insecurity then the crippling fear i finally shook- the scars mended with peace of mind, faded into a myriad of self-assurance ~~~~ a w i l t e d face can be renewed; my skin no longer supple and hasn’t been toned for years but each line has meaning, tells an endless tale- a tale of LOSS and a tale of LOVE ______________________________________ Written: 12.22.19 Judged: 1.7.20 N-A rerun 5 Poetry Contest John Hamilton

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Date: 5/17/2020 10:08:00 PM
I loved this write, Laura. I just turned 60, and I find that aging softens a lot of hardness and files down a lot of sharp edges. Though more gray and wrinkled, and less agile, I have more confidence, for compassion, more contentment, and more focus to pursue the dreams I want to pursue. The scars are chapters in my biography that remind me I am strong enough to overcome setbacks. The lines in my face are either from laughing, or worrying about people I truly cared about. Life is good. Hugs...
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Date: 2/27/2020 4:25:00 PM
a metaphorical masterpiece Luloo. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/27/2020 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful Second Placement Luloo! Your ending is superb! xxoo
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Date: 12/26/2019 6:35:00 AM
I agree totally w/Christ ... an elegant, graceful movement of thought, LL! Gorgeous metaphorical expressions. Pure poetry in muse motion. May love light your path in life always.
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Date: 12/26/2019 12:10:00 PM
aww thank you dear Freddie- may your day be full of laughter and joy- Blessings from across the miles x:-)-luloo
Date: 12/23/2019 9:18:00 AM
Beautifully done Luloo. That last stanza says it all. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 12/26/2019 12:09:00 PM
thank you dear Chris! x:-)-luloo

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