The Memory That Fell Out of My Grandfather's Wallet

and she stares back 
through the small window
placed precariously on the hearth
catching my sporadic glimpse.

this morning is different
an interrupted rendezvous,
a young man your arm holds
casting that familiar smile
	
	(One plus one equals two)

these voices remind me through
a Pablo Neruda window sill
exiled by the note found 
wants I should know you.

a smile torments my memory
twisting a distant storm
unable to produce rain,
stirs clouds of silt vanished footprints.

you have evaporated now,
your pedestal seated high 
next to life’s marble vase;
	never aging
	always new

hidden behind a false wall
as something haunts me
misplaced like an old shoe

understands the process,
while womb to air
escapes without an imprint

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/8/2009 11:27:00 AM
What a great piece! You create wonderful images and evoke many emotions! Wonderful poem Jason! ~Trudy
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Date: 3/25/2009 6:11:00 PM
This is an incredible piece of writing Jason. I read this piece and I was thinking about a piece I recently wrote about death/father/and youth..this brought me down that path..I don't know why I was thinking of an urn sitting up high next to marble vase..never aging...always new..I am thinking something missing between two..something lost that will never be regain..maybe I still afected by own piece...this is moving and strong..awesome writng brother.
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Date: 3/25/2009 6:04:00 PM
Wow...amazing. I don't know which line I love more than another....it doesn't let one escape without an imprint...you are a terrific writer, Jason!
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Date: 3/25/2009 4:55:00 PM
What a compelling title and a brilliant concept well-executied, Jason!
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