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The Melody of You

the melody of you ~ a dreary morn greets me, raindrops slow dance as dark skies hum a lonely song though within my heart a beautiful sun rises, for the melody of you is all I hear

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Alexis Y.

Date: 10/22/2019 10:47:00 AM

WoW! Chris, You create lovely pictures with words. Your words cause such a beautiful scene. Nice declaration of love . We done. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 12:34:00 PM

Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate your kindness always Alexis

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/21/2019 2:44:00 PM

Beautiful Chris! Is it raining there again today like here! I love the rain but of late I find it depressing but not in this write!;)

Chris Green
Date: 10/22/2019 12:33:00 PM

It was yesterday in the morning but not today. Thank you Brenda. I am happy you liked this one.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/21/2019 1:28:00 PM

A beautiful melody to embrace, are these moments that softly curl around you. Your thoughts make the heart flutter my friend. :) Brandy

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 1:37:00 PM

Thank you so very much Brandy. What a nice thing to say to me.

Hello There

Date: 10/21/2019 1:05:00 PM

Well, these are sweet words ~ actually, make me want to sing. Warble, warble ;)

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 1:11:00 PM

Thank you my harmonic friend. Please, feel free to sing all you like when you come to visit. I am always in the mood for beautiful melodies.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/21/2019 1:01:00 PM

My friend, I envision you living under immeasurably vast and magnificent skies, they fill your poetry. xomo

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 1:07:00 PM

And you would be right my friend. I live in the wide open spaces of south Texas and it is beautiful here. No two mornings or evenings are ever the same. Thank you so much Maureen.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/21/2019 12:38:00 PM

Such a beautiful poem my friend I will send you my sunshine because I can bask in the beauty of your words and smile the same :). Hugs

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 12:53:00 PM

You already did send your sunshine with this beautiful comment. Thank you so very much Sandy.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/21/2019 12:22:00 PM

This is so nice Chris. The day here started out that way, then it cleared to beautiful warm sunshine and it is like reading this :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2019 12:53:00 PM

Thanks so much Heidi, The same here, dreary and raining this morning but an absolutely gorgeous day outside right now.