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The Maverick Gardener -Win

Viewed from the snow covered mountain Slopes laden with flower beds like Colorful vase of flowers I saw the* Him Kamal flower I asked, “Why are you all alone? Beauty is to be adored” Should give yourself before Your petals fall to dust”. Quick came the response from flower “Am not lonely, enjoy these heights Shelter of blue umbrella”. I asked if I crush your petals The flower said he would be glad Its fragrance will radiate. Purpose of life fulfilled If destroyed not admired. Nearby look at the snowy streams Ripples flowing kicking each other Exhilarating music. Our life like ever flowing streams Water running towards ocean Currents never turning back Perennial flow of life Small life merging in big. The nature is peace all around She only disturbs who disturbs She teaches wisdom to those Praise her beauty, not destroy her. Develop the aesthetic sense To feel the nature’s beauty. Looking into the sky Searching their gardener. ========================= Date 10-1-14 Third place win in Contest: Thank you by P.D. Eighth place win in: Contest: Maverick Free verse sponsored by John Freeman

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Date: 1/18/2014 6:14:00 AM
A wonderful write, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/11/2014 4:57:00 PM
This poem is very beautiful, yet it has a layer of deep sadness within it. A very moving write, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win, as well!
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Date: 1/10/2014 11:24:00 PM
Congratulations Dr Ram, ... If you'd like take a trip to my blog ----> ON THE ROCKS------ http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18527&PoetID=18720 <---- enjoy if you'd like... Love Always & Forever <3 LINDA <3
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:36:00 AM
A deep and poignant poem, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in the "Maverick Free Verse" contest sponsored by John Moses Freeman. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2011 3:25:00 AM
best CONGARST to you, dr, ram.. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/16/2011 9:02:00 PM
Beautifully done. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:39:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your fantastic win in the Maverick Free Verse contest my friend.. another alluring write and win for u to enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/16/2011 7:29:00 PM
Very nice write yourself Dr.Ram it's an honor to share victory in the contest luv ~Virginia
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:13:00 PM
So great to see you in the winning circle Dr Ram. Congratulations on your worthy poem's eighth place win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/2/2010 8:56:00 PM
Quite beautiful, Dr. Ram!!
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Date: 11/2/2010 11:38:00 AM
How this can pinch my soul, dr. ram... tremendous write and flow.. good luck in the contest! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/2/2010 6:34:00 AM
Soup mail returned, Dr. Ram. Thank you.
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Date: 11/1/2010 4:02:00 PM
Soup mail
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Date: 11/1/2010 11:52:00 AM
It was my pleasure to read your amazing writing today Dr. Ram. Reads as a winner. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:45:00 AM
i love this set up.it just makes me reminisce about my childhood flower garden. great work sir.
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:12:00 AM
i think you have visited this place.otherwise, it could be dfficult to craeate this great poem.indeed you know the gardener.fabiyas
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Date: 11/1/2010 8:04:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful retelling in your poetry Dr. Ram of the lovely mountains and your words are like magic in this piece.. very visual and expressive lines.. Catie will enjoy ..good luck in her contest my friend with luv..
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Date: 11/1/2010 7:04:00 AM
Beautiful piece, Dr Ram, especially the line, 'She only disturbs who disturbs'.Great work. PS. You said that won something with, 'Party Of Evil'. Interested to find where you saw that. Thank you, Eamon
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Date: 11/1/2010 5:58:00 AM
Outstanding entry, Dr Ram. Awesome word picture. Beautifully written. Good luck. A "brazillion" thanks for your kind words. Ralph
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Date: 11/1/2010 4:06:00 AM
and how great the gardener in the sky is to lend a soul like you to us. .You water the soil so beautifully!Outstanding gem going tmfs!Celene.
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Date: 11/1/2010 2:48:00 AM
a scenic language of a poem, dr.ram... a rare piece that celebrates nature.. i am charmed.. good luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my page.. warmest, nette
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Date: 10/31/2010 11:12:00 PM
Wow great poem... I give you 7 pts Thank you for commenting on my poem. . HJ
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Date: 10/31/2010 7:55:00 PM
Dr. Ram, If only nature could teach us to be kinder to our home planet and to each other, imagine what a utopia we could have. Thanks for this one. To my favs. Thank you for your kind comments on my work. All the Best, Will
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Date: 10/31/2010 1:48:00 PM
just enjoyed this discriptive work.in particular the last two stanzas,where evreything complements, and edifiys what has gone before, and also brings the energy of living things, to the readers focus. thank you Dr Ram.
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