The Man of Men

John Sullivan, a man among men
Digging digging, deep as can't show
Laying the dirt, for him for his home
The king's castle, for stature of stone

Caterpillars, creeping the low crest
Creeping writhing, creeping for his heart
They don't have far, a far journey's climb
So he crushes, crushes them on down

He can't crush far, a few inches deep
Pushing ploughing, his foundation weak
Hushing hushing, a few inches deep 
So they stop slight, gathering their force

He doesn't see, magnitude and strength
Crushing them so, to his own expense
He doesn't see, they will not let him
He's clawing in, deep through his own skin

Caterpillars, creeping the low crest 
Bursting blowing, from concealed caccoons
Cascading out, though a starving soul
Leaving a dark valley of husks

John Sullivan, a man among men
Digging digging, deep as can't show
Laying the dirt, for him for his home
The king's grave, for stature of sand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Godwin Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 8:30 PM
This form is Free Verse, in my opinion. I gladly dug in as the story was gripping and worthy of hanging on until the end. You dramatically wove this story and I enjoyed the read. All the best ... CayCay
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March 22, 2018 at 4:59 PM
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