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The Man In the Moon

The sun is distant now; lowering its gaze upon me to a mere blanket of obscurity. The sea is calm but still tantalisingly sinister and threatening. The silence is hostile, I am cold and alone - each breath I take is an intricate requisite. I am sceptical, burdened with misplaced ideals, unconvinced I will ever unearth the vitality within myself. Kneeling on the edge of my own existence, I wait for a voice to utter my path, The man in the moon offers me a reluctant and hesitant grin as he watches over me. I'm too incompetent to counter the gesture. My inability in offering a tear is poignant for us both - He understands me. It is beautiful.

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Harry Horsman

Date: 8/12/2018 3:52:00 AM

wow, you take one far away deep with in your inner most feelings, the poetry is superb, the mind that drives the pen, amazing.

Leigh Stephenson
Date: 8/18/2018 5:13:00 AM

Barry, Thank you for your lovely comments, it is very much appreciated. Have a lovely day :-)

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 8/10/2018 2:19:00 PM

Wow! Leigh this is incredible.You have an incredible poetic prowess.Every Line is so full of intense imagery with a certain sadness leading to your wry ending about “The man in the Moon” I love this and would like it as a favourite and also ask please believe in yourself.

Leigh Stephenson
Date: 8/10/2018 5:38:00 PM

Hi Sylvia, I really appreiate you dropping by and reading my poem, and for your kind words. Thank you so much. Have a lovely day :-)

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/3/2018 1:17:00 PM

Things will get better with the passage of time. Nice descriptiveness in this melancholy piece.

Leigh Stephenson
Date: 8/10/2018 5:42:00 PM

Hi Robert, Thank you for your comments, it's very much appreciated. Take care :-)

Joseph May

Date: 7/29/2018 8:44:00 PM

Looking skyward for the answers we seek..A melancholy offering Leigh...Well written

Leigh Stephenson
Date: 8/1/2018 3:55:00 PM

Many thanks for you comment Joseph, have lovely day :-)

Kevin Shaw

Date: 7/29/2018 4:39:00 PM

Hi Leigh, a lot of sadness in this poem, when I read it I felt like an Astronaut being cast adrift from the Mother ship, endlessly floating not able to re-connect. Very moving and beautifully written, regards Kevin x

Leigh Stephenson
Date: 7/30/2018 7:33:00 AM

Kevin, thank you for your kind words. I like your analogy with the astronaut being cast adrift. Many thanks :-) x