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The Man

Interesting, was the man staring at a painting with great enthrallment, and I went and stood beside him, curious. He was attractive and very appealing, and when he looked at me- I gave him my best come - hither look. Oh, he was captivating . . . I wanted to say something interesting, something very thought provoking , to entrap him in my allurement, but I just said hello . . . I was rivited to him, intrigued. He smiled, amused, interested, then said, the painting was spellbinding. Oh, so charming and fascinating, so I tried to appear beguiling- hoping he would take note of my beauty. He invited me for café. (Oh that voice!) We had charisma and our conversation was absorbing- He was interesting and engrossing, and I was compelled to touch his hand . . . Oh, when did I become a seducer, with lust, passion and desire? Interesting. _____________________________ December 26, 2016 Poetry/Narrative/The Man Copyright Protected, ID 16- 861-173-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 12/27/2016 4:09:00 PM
Painting the man painting, what a lovely paint! Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 12/27/2016 1:08:00 PM
Great. Beautiful. Seductive.
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Date: 12/27/2016 9:06:00 AM
I took note of this beauty...Best of luck
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Date: 12/27/2016 7:12:00 AM
You set the scene perfectly I could watch it like it was a movie, very well said! hugs.
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Date: 12/27/2016 7:10:00 AM
Really nice, I could see this entire scene play out clearly and the ending was as captivating as the poet.
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