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The Lux



"The Lux"

we entered The Club
danced our way along lines
trialled sentences all 

written towards Light
the Dark called us all in 
we thought we were like laureates 

like laureates 
we were all drugged 
one way or another

on Love potions all
like laureates drugged
we scored 

our stories 
washed and pegged 
hanging loose on Love potions, all

and we danced our way 
along lines fine drawn 
like we were above it all 

wallflowers all waiting
bare throats voiceless 
offered up for kisses

naked up against the wall 

waiting 
for warm comments 
to be drawn and called

we entered The Club
danced our way along slim lines
poets bent and bodies of work well-lit

toeing the line 
rules underscored
the fallen ones ignored, yet all

crossing lines this way and that
tap dancing across keys 
silently spoken laws on hidden tongues

the keys 
transferred entry
in secret kisses passed 

we entered The Club
danced our way along lines
trialled sentences all

we entered The Club,

The Lux 
seductive hypnotic
called us all in

we passed keys 
on voiceless tongues
for entry 
 
kissing the undone
along lines
trialled sentences all 



Candide Diderot. ‘24 






“Once upon a time
Science opened up the door
They would feed the hungry fields
'Til they couldn't eat no more
But the potions that were made
Touched the creatures down below, oh
And they grew up in the way
That we'd never seen before

Supernature”




MAGIC THEATER
ENTRANCE NOT FOR EVERYBODY
"I tried to open the door, but the heavy old latch would not stir. The display too was over. It had suddenly ceased, sadly convinced of its uselessness. I took a few steps back, landing deep into the mud, but no more letters came. The display was over. For a long time I stood waiting in the mud, but in vain.
Then, when I had given up and gone back to the alley, a few colored letters were dropped here and there, reflected on the asphalt in front of me. I read:
FOR MADMEN ONLY!"
(Hermann Hesse/"Steppenwolf")




"Give me a kiss, and to that kiss a score;
Then to that twenty, add a hundred more:
A thousand to that hundred: so kiss on,
To make that thousand up a million.
Treble that million, and when that is done,
Let’s kiss afresh, as when we first begun."






pegged.
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June 1, 2024 at 5:27 PM
The Club.
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June 1, 2024 at 5:27 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jI-7ckB-QRc
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June 1, 2024 at 5:27 PM
Cerrone - Give Me Remixes (Full Album).
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June 1, 2024 at 9:42 AM
"The egg is the world. Who would be born must first destroy a world." Hesse. ;)
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June 1, 2024 at 9:05 AM
“Your soul has fallen to bits and pieces. Good. Rearrange them to suit yourself.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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June 1, 2024 at 9:05 AM
“Ah, Harry, we have to stumble through so much dirt and humbug before we reach home. And we have no one to guide us. Our only guide is our homesickness.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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June 1, 2024 at 9:05 AM
“All interpretation, all psychology, all attempts to make things comprehensible, require the medium of theories, mythologies, and lies.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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June 1, 2024 at 9:05 AM
“You learned people and artists have, no doubt, all sorts of superior things in your heads; but you're human beings like the rest of us, and we, too, have our dreams and fancies.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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June 2, 2024 at 5:40 AM
What you state below is commendable, empathetic, generous and kind. Thank you and I appreciate your honesty. Beautiful commodities of immense, intense value. And a part of me agrees, stands with you and those thoughts of yours. But if I was to align myself to the "quotes" I have invested in here, this is the one I am drawn to, because it is the strongest quote in this place aligned to truth, "Here, too, I found neither home nor company, nothing but a seat from which to view a stage where strange people played strange parts.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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June 1, 2024 at 9:05 AM
“In my brain were stored a thousand pictures.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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June 1, 2024 at 9:04 AM
"Steppenwolf"/Herman Hesse, 1927. English trans, 1929.
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June 1, 2024 at 9:11 AM
https://epdf.tips/steppenwolf67ba5ea3f6403885553eded6f609e0aa96238.html
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June 1, 2024 at 9:04 AM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Steppenwolf_(novel)
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June 1, 2024 at 9:04 AM
"Animals are sad as a rule," she went on. "And when a man is sad—I don't mean because he has a toothache or has lost some money, but because he sees, for once in a way, how it all is with life and everything, and is sad in earnest—he always looks a little like an animal. (Hermine, "Steppenwolf"/Hesse)
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June 1, 2024 at 9:04 AM
“Here, too, I found neither home nor company, nothing but a seat from which to view a stage where strange people played strange parts.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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June 1, 2024 at 9:04 AM
“Doesn't your learning reveal to you that the reason why I please you and mean so much to you is because I am a kind of looking-glass for you, because there is something in me that answers you and understands you? Really, we ought all to be such looking-glasses to each other and answer and correspond to each other.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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June 1, 2024 at 7:49 AM
"Supernature"/Cerrone.
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June 1, 2024 at 7:50 AM
LYRICS/"Supernature", Cerrone. ********************************* https://genius.com/Cerrone-supernature-lyrics
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June 1, 2024 at 7:49 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ztU1e2Gb_8E
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