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"The Lux" we entered The Club danced our way along lines trialled sentences all written towards Light the Dark called us all in we thought we were like laureates like laureates we were all drugged one way or another on Love potions all like laureates drugged we scored our stories washed and pegged hanging loose on Love potions, all and we danced our way along lines fine drawn like we were above it all wallflowers all waiting bare throats voiceless offered up for kisses naked up against the wall waiting for warm comments to be drawn and called we entered The Club danced our way along slim lines poets bent and bodies of work well-lit toeing the line rules underscored the fallen ones ignored, yet all crossing lines this way and that tap dancing across keys silently spoken laws on hidden tongues the keys transferred entry in secret kisses passed we entered The Club danced our way along lines trialled sentences all we entered The Club, The Lux seductive hypnotic called us all in we passed keys on voiceless tongues for entry kissing the undone along lines trialled sentences all Candide Diderot. ‘24 “Once upon a time Science opened up the door They would feed the hungry fields 'Til they couldn't eat no more But the potions that were made Touched the creatures down below, oh And they grew up in the way That we'd never seen before Supernature” MAGIC THEATER ENTRANCE NOT FOR EVERYBODY "I tried to open the door, but the heavy old latch would not stir. The display too was over. It had suddenly ceased, sadly convinced of its uselessness. I took a few steps back, landing deep into the mud, but no more letters came. The display was over. For a long time I stood waiting in the mud, but in vain. Then, when I had given up and gone back to the alley, a few colored letters were dropped here and there, reflected on the asphalt in front of me. I read: FOR MADMEN ONLY!" (Hermann Hesse/"Steppenwolf") "Give me a kiss, and to that kiss a score; Then to that twenty, add a hundred more: A thousand to that hundred: so kiss on, To make that thousand up a million. Treble that million, and when that is done, Let’s kiss afresh, as when we first begun." pegged.

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Date: 6/1/2024 5:27:00 PM
The Club.
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Candide Diderot
Date: 6/1/2024 5:27:00 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jI-7ckB-QRc
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Date: 6/1/2024 5:27:00 PM
Cerrone - Give Me Remixes (Full Album).
Date: 6/1/2024 9:42:00 AM
"The egg is the world. Who would be born must first destroy a world." Hesse. ;)
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Date: 6/1/2024 9:05:00 AM
“In my brain were stored a thousand pictures.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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Date: 6/1/2024 9:05:00 AM
“You learned people and artists have, no doubt, all sorts of superior things in your heads; but you're human beings like the rest of us, and we, too, have our dreams and fancies.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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Date: 6/2/2024 5:40:00 AM
What you state below is commendable, empathetic, generous and kind. Thank you and I appreciate your honesty. Beautiful commodities of immense, intense value. And a part of me agrees, stands with you and those thoughts of yours. But if I was to align myself to the "quotes" I have invested in here, this is the one I am drawn to, because it is the strongest quote in this place aligned to truth, "Here, too, I found neither home nor company, nothing but a seat from which to view a stage where strange people played strange parts.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
Date: 6/1/2024 9:05:00 AM
“All interpretation, all psychology, all attempts to make things comprehensible, require the medium of theories, mythologies, and lies.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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Date: 6/1/2024 9:05:00 AM
“Ah, Harry, we have to stumble through so much dirt and humbug before we reach home. And we have no one to guide us. Our only guide is our homesickness.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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Date: 6/1/2024 9:05:00 AM
“Your soul has fallen to bits and pieces. Good. Rearrange them to suit yourself.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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Date: 6/1/2024 9:04:00 AM
“Doesn't your learning reveal to you that the reason why I please you and mean so much to you is because I am a kind of looking-glass for you, because there is something in me that answers you and understands you? Really, we ought all to be such looking-glasses to each other and answer and correspond to each other.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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Date: 6/1/2024 9:04:00 AM
“Here, too, I found neither home nor company, nothing but a seat from which to view a stage where strange people played strange parts.” (Hermann Hesse, Steppenwolf)
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Date: 6/1/2024 9:04:00 AM
"Animals are sad as a rule," she went on. "And when a man is sad—I don't mean because he has a toothache or has lost some money, but because he sees, for once in a way, how it all is with life and everything, and is sad in earnest—he always looks a little like an animal. (Hermine, "Steppenwolf"/Hesse)
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Date: 6/1/2024 9:04:00 AM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Steppenwolf_(novel)
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Date: 6/1/2024 9:04:00 AM
"Steppenwolf"/Herman Hesse, 1927. English trans, 1929.
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Date: 6/1/2024 9:11:00 AM
https://epdf.tips/steppenwolf67ba5ea3f6403885553eded6f609e0aa96238.html
Date: 6/1/2024 7:49:00 AM
"Supernature"/Cerrone.
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Date: 6/1/2024 7:50:00 AM
LYRICS/"Supernature", Cerrone. ********************************* https://genius.com/Cerrone-supernature-lyrics
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Date: 6/1/2024 7:49:00 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ztU1e2Gb_8E

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