The Lovely Days

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Orange sun is shining, pretty blooms follow green lane, And smiles seem to linger, like azure skies after rain, Midnights tend to sparkle, with a million vibrant stars, Life's so much better, now you're in this world of ours! Scarlet hummingbirds flit humming, pale moon is a pearl, And sunsets glow brighter, multicolored heralding swirl. The peach dawns are now hopeful, in loud birdsong bliss, Hope your dreams come true, and you get your b-day wish!

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Karen Jones

Date: 10/8/2021 4:53:00 PM

Wow this is awesome. Appeals to senses with lovely imagery. Would make the perfect birthday card!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/8/2021 10:25:00 PM

Thank you for the kind words and wonderful compliment, Karen. Have a nice weekend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2021 5:21:00 PM

Wow! Evelyn, It was such a delight reading this well-written poem that's filled with fantastic imagery. I saw a birthday wish tucked within this beautiful piece. Well done;-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/6/2021 5:42:00 PM

Thank you very much for your buoyant remarks, dear Alexis. You did see a birthday wish tucked into this verse, because this poem is a birthday greeting for whomever comes to mind when one reads it-even yourself. Kindest regards, Evelyn ;)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/6/2021 4:10:00 PM

Hello Evelyn ... beautiful scenes to enlighten a heart. We do love colour and scents for positivety, and this is what I read in your poem - thank you Evelyn - Lindsay

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/6/2021 5:05:00 PM

Hi Lindsay...You are more than welcome. I'm glad you found the scenes of this verse to be beautiful. I offer my deepest thanks for your kind appreciation. Have a nice evening. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/4/2021 12:23:00 PM

When heaven is yours, oh, the colors you will write about! I agree with Harry, about your positivity! I’m claiming that bottom line…even if it’s not for me…my b-day is in a couple days ;) Hugs-a-million and a plethora of dynamic color for you, dear one!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/4/2021 6:02:00 PM

It's your birthday?! Well, happy birthday indeed!!! I love for people to see themselves in my poetry, so that line is definitely for you. Thank you for your good wishes and compliments, which are so inspiring. Hugs-a-million, and thanks for the color. :D