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The Lotus

Green are the eyes that gawk at her, but tongue can’t defy her praise. Daisies gaze grudgingly in her direction, as gentle breeze beckons, Please bow. The scent of her perfume draws bees from far afield; the buzz is in everyone’s ears. News come to her with strong sex appeals. All floras fall down on their knees. A gust of wind brings whimpers from weeping willows, and soft dandelions’ roars. He sits on yonder blue grass, with soft eyes he stares at her; sheltered under a yellow jacket with blue bells and bachelor buttons, harboring a sickening desire to be with her. Bulbs shine radiant in the early spring, Siberian quills. Blue are the hyacinths and daffodils, they lost everyone’s love. Her delicate pink, perk up by the dawn’s slight light and the dew that bath her at night. Her petals faintly ruffled by the young wind’s caress. God, she looks lovely in that perfect pink dress

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/8/2010 7:53:00 PM
Love the fact it made you think Congrats on having this featured. Rhonda Hero
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Date: 7/8/2010 4:05:00 PM
Beautifully written with great imagery here, Earle. A well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup !! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Earle. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 7/6/2010 12:37:00 AM
very well written, awesome, blessings x
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Date: 7/5/2010 10:09:00 AM
Congrats Earle, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/5/2010 9:19:00 AM
Congrats Earle on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. great one to share with us all.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..on vacation
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Date: 7/5/2010 6:56:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week and your win in Constances comp. Rgds Janette
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:20:00 AM
that last line is so cute! Congratulations for being in the winner circle. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:43:00 PM
Congratulations Earle, on your poem's succvess in Rp's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/2/2010 1:13:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win in Constance's lovely contest with this fine poem >> James
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations Earle on your poem being in the spotlight in A Rambling Poet's contest "The Flower". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2010 8:47:00 PM
Congrats to you !!a true beauty~Rick
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Date: 7/1/2010 8:37:00 PM
Lotus Blossoms are truly beautiful and this poem really brings out their beauty - Congrat's on your well deserved HM!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/1/2010 8:14:00 PM
Lovely flower and poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/1/2010 7:06:00 PM
Congrats Earle on your HM in the Flower contest with this awesome poem .. enjoy a special honor for a great write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation... AlohA...
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Date: 6/30/2010 12:04:00 PM
An original piece..I love it. BG
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