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The Lost Daughter

“The Lost Daughter”
Thursday walked through the doors on a Tuesday She sat in the Waiting Room, the place smelled too sterile, Antiseptic wash, rank clean with soaps of fine lyes no rugs to sweep bulldust under such shiny spotless floors, All open doors Effective, efficient, cold and distant No blow flies Time ticking raw. Saturday was far away Learning about "policy" and how to "fairly" play, walking down bustling University Halls shining bright sun, traversing all manners of shade The Lost Daughter looked in the bathroom mirror Hazel Green eyes double take she did gaze Occasionally she heard Thursday calling her name She turned on the faucets, washed her hands, singing a song about "A Brand New Day" turned her back to better things, and swiftly walked out the swinging door into the fray. The Lost Daughter left on a Saturday She watched 3 dreams slip away How to communicate all that she wanted to say Love was all she possessed THE biggest gift, to leave on their pillows She blew them her kiss an imprint on small brains Like "Wind in the Willows" “Take my hand”, He said, “no need to worry, although it's too soon, we will work out a way”. “You’re up next,” the matron relayed, “let’s get you ready”. The Lost Daughter sucked in the Aether and breathed. She replied, “Bring it on, I’m game”. (Lovejoy-Burton/April 2018) For K, M, & G x
"A mother's love for her child is like nothing else in the world. It knows no law, no pity, it dares all things and crushes down remorselessly all that stands in its path." Agatha Christie "Mother is the name for God in the lips and hearts of little children." William Makepeace Thackeray "Sonnet III", William Shakespeare
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Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 7:27 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9RMHHwJ9Eqk
Juman Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 10:10 PM
Took me a third try to gather my thoughts of your write. It is well written ---I am just slow
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:29 AM
"I doubt you're slow", She said. Said She, Thank you.
Swartz Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Much love in these words for your daughter from birth through life. Another great piece written from your heart and soul which are in tune with your mind.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 11:36 PM
Thank you James. All the stories are for Georgia. x
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 10:58 PM
This is a poem about Mothers and Daughters. The irony and the beauty of this poem (which is hidden, but will be mentioned here out of pure respect), is that the love of the written word was passed down to the daughter from the writer's father and in turn is passed down to the writer's daughter. This written in third person....I must be astral travelling.x This poem is about LOVE and finding "Home".
Parker Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 9:01 PM
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Parker Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 12:34 PM
I see why sonnet III is your favorite as mine is sonnet XXXVII, your question may or not be answered in sonnet LXXVIII...verily I say to pluck a flower as a rose does not a rose bush make...
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 10:21 PM
Sonnet III. Thumbs up.x For you FP - There is a mystery surrounding that man, were they his words (the plays and the sonnets)? Who did he dedicate the Sonnets to FP? Who was W.H.? http://www.shakespeares-sonnets.com/dedication....(https://www.history.com/news/ask-history/did-shakespeare-really-write-his-own-plays)...commentry on Sonnet 1 here is interesting - but III is my most favourite. Sonnet I, commentary...(http://www.shakespeares-sonnets.com/sonnet/1)
Messina Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Tuesday has arrived, and Thursday is right around the corner. But she shouldn't approach Thursday without first learning what Wednesday's lessons have taught her. Best wishes for you and your daughter...Nice write, Leanne...Charlie
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Wednesday is A Brand New Day. The next chapter commenced on a Wednesday; a whole new chapter begins. Thanks Charlie x
Michael Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 4:09 AM
If we all thought of God as our mothers, the world be would be in a much better place right now...Lovely writing style...Thursday will arrive...All the best
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Tuesday has arrived...."Roll Call". Thanks Arturo.
Gupta Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 8:51 PM
Touching but teeming with enjoyable life ...
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 8:53 PM
Yes it is teeming with "LIFE" in all forms. Thanks Probir. x
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