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The Longings of An Old Man

I long to— Walk one more time To where the land ends, and the ocean begins To listen expectantly for the sounds of infant waves Grasping layers of golden sand I long to— Hear the fat gulls with white bellies And ebony eyes Floating on invisible wires Calling for the savory morsels Hidden inside the curled fingers of an old man I long to— Stand beneath the tangerine sky Lazily descending into the cradle of the sea Vacating heaven for the snowy celestial sphere Hung upon Vincent’s starry canvas Ten thousand lights scattered forever I long to— Be embraced by the tenebrous sea Her loneliness engulfing me like lovers of yesterday I long to— Gaze beyond the past wrapped in sorrow The years of trudging through cheerless mire Searching for reasons without answers Answers without questions I long to— Remember only moments worth remembering A twirling montage of love and hope And dreams Of a time when two became one Hearts pulsing in harmony Minds ascending to tidal floods of ecstasy I long to— See your face To walk hand in hand To where the land ends and the ocean begins I long to— Do it all again

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Date: 7/16/2023 11:43:00 PM
A beautiful poem of memories of the experiences we've had in life, that we'll not forget their impact on us. It was a peaceful train of thought, you share with us,through your soothing poetry, Jim. I'm glad to see this poem recognised as one of the top 100 here at PoetrySoup. Congratulations, Bill Baker
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/1/2023 2:16:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words of encouragement!
Date: 8/18/2022 2:06:00 PM
Oh, Jim--your poem is so sad. If only we could do it all again...Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 8/16/2022 9:15:00 AM
How very beautiful, heartfelt and sad. A poem straight from your heart Jim! Love it and Congratulations on your POTD honour so very well deserved. Debx
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Date: 8/9/2022 7:36:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD! Fantastic imagery!
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Date: 8/9/2022 5:02:00 PM
Jim, your poem is so beautifully penned, great ink and congratulations on your deserving POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 8/9/2022 4:39:00 PM
Great pen Jim congratulations on the POTD, this is written with real maturity and insightfulness throughout. Blessings,Gordon
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 5:36:00 PM
Thank you sir!
Date: 8/9/2022 4:25:00 PM
This an incredible poem, Jim. I'll keep it in my favorites. Being very old myself, I can say it speaks absolute truth. Elizabeth
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 5:37:00 PM
Thank you very much Elizabeth.
Date: 8/9/2022 3:55:00 PM
Old age can bring those longings but sometimes some of those longings can be filled in small ways. I enjoyed reading your POTD. Congratulations. Sara
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2022 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD! A beautiful glimpse of a life who would do it all again.... :)Paulette
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Paulette
Date: 8/9/2022 11:34:00 AM
Longing to "walk one more time, where the land ends, and the ocean begins." This thought curls softly around me. There's something magical and emotional about such a moment. Everything has a beginning, and then it must end. The longing in your heart is evident within your words. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Jim, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Brandy for kind words and taking the time to share your thoughts. I am looking for advance readers/reviews for my second book of poetry coming out this Fall. If you would like to help, please let me know. Jim
Date: 8/9/2022 10:27:00 AM
Absolutely delightful Jim. Congratulations on your POTD. The longings of your heart and spirit are blended into a lovely poem. Blessings. I hope you get to re-visit these places of "moments worth remembering" in your life journey. Blessings.
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:33:00 PM
Thank you Sam
Date: 8/9/2022 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D win. WOW!!! What a wonderful write. Your title could also be "The Longings of an Old Lady." I Love This One. Have a great/blessed day writing away....................
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:33:00 PM
Thank you Paula for kind words and taking the time to share your thoughts. I am looking for advance readers/reviews for my second book of poetry coming out this Fall. If you would like to help, please let me know. Jim
Date: 8/9/2022 9:29:00 AM
Exquisite write, Jim. I sincerely hope you get to satisfy all those longings. And congrats on POTD.
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:34:00 PM
Thank you Mr. Slaughter
Date: 8/9/2022 9:15:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR AMAZING POEM BEING AWARDED POTD! A wonderful creation expressing the heart and soul searching of a life lived. A definite fav.. God bless...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/11/2022 2:32:00 PM
Anytime my friend. A worthy poet deserves to hear that they inspire, impress and gift treasures in ink to others. As such is the purpose in which true poets compose and gift unto this too oft dark world that we all must wade through, imho. Just shoot me a soupmail. God bless...
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:34:00 PM
Thank you Robert for kind words and taking the time to share your thoughts. I am looking for advance readers/reviews for my second book of poetry coming out this Fall. If you would like to help, please let me know. Jim
Date: 8/9/2022 8:52:00 AM
Quite an emotional write Jim, and deserving of the honour of POTD, congratulations. Tom
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:35:00 PM
Thank you Tom
Date: 8/9/2022 8:17:00 AM
Beautiful, Jim. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.!
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:35:00 PM
Thank you sir!
Date: 8/9/2022 7:26:00 AM
"To walk one more time, to where the land ends and ocean begins", wow what an amazing way to begin a poem... and so many beautiful lines... " tangerine sky lazily descending into the cradle of the sea"... so creative and poetic... Congratulations on your POTD honor with this exquisite write Jim... God bless... ~ Ani
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:36:00 PM
Thank you Anitha for kind words and taking the time to share your thoughts. I am looking for advance readers/reviews for my second book of poetry coming out this Fall. If you would like to help, please let me know. Jim
Date: 8/9/2022 7:10:00 AM
Just beautiful in its descriptions and emotions . A fav for me . I love the tender beauty of mind and soul you have penned here Jim . Congratulations on POTD! Susan :)
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:36:00 PM
Thank you Susan for kind words and taking the time to share your thoughts. I am looking for advance readers/reviews for my second book of poetry coming out this Fall. If you would like to help, please let me know. Jim
Date: 8/9/2022 6:56:00 AM
Magnificently written Jim. i am fortunate to still have that hand to hold as we walk...I shall share this with her now...
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:37:00 PM
Thank you John Lawless, hold her hand as long as you can.
Date: 8/9/2022 6:33:00 AM
Exquisite nostalgic free verse poetry Jim, congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:37:00 PM
Thank you Belle for kind words and taking the time to share your thoughts. I am looking for advance readers/reviews for my second book of poetry coming out this Fall. If you would like to help, please let me know. Jim
Date: 8/9/2022 6:12:00 AM
Many beautiful longings - nostalgic as well as true - written in a very sentiment-filled song-style. I read it many times. Felt your feelings. Congratulations!
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:38:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj for kind words and taking the time to share your thoughts. I am looking for advance readers/reviews for my second book of poetry coming out this Fall. If you would like to help, please let me know. Jim
Date: 8/9/2022 6:07:00 AM
A FAV for my list, Jim. Congratulations on your POTD. A beautifully written expression of the longing of many of us here on PoetrySoup. I liked the fequent references to nature and the springling of colors in your poem. Thanks for sharing, enjoy your special day! Bill
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:39:00 PM
Bill, I always appreciate hearing from the "us" om Poetry soup. You are a kind man.
Date: 8/9/2022 5:56:00 AM
Enchanting read Jim! I truly enjoyed this work of yours. Congratulations on POTD! Linda
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Linda (love the owl).
Date: 8/9/2022 5:47:00 AM
Wow. This is a. Excellent POTD. A favorite for me. Congratulations Jim. Enjoy :)
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Heidi for kind words and taking the time to share your thoughts. I am looking for advance readers/reviews for my second book of poetry coming out this Fall. If you would like to help, please let me know. Jim
Date: 8/9/2022 4:20:00 AM
that's lovely - and congrats on your POTD
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Jim Hirtle
Date: 8/9/2022 3:40:00 PM
Thanks Jeff!
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