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The Lone Fighter

A young tree stands amongst weather Strapped down with only a small piece of wood and leather It’s been beaten down by wind and rain It’s been left alone to cry in shame Left aside in a harshest environment Its bark is almost torn off The tree is pitched toward a sloping trough No one fertilized it before the winter Soon it may look like a giant splinter But the young tree still stands up tall He’s fighting through a mighty snow squall The salt from the road has left him weak It looks like things for him, are pretty bleak The years wined by and the tree still stands With a sad spirit and a wounded bands It tells a story of the years of pain And all the damage it disdained He stands today with a slight pitch to one side It’s the love of God that’s kept him alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 1/2/2010 12:01:00 PM
excellent metaphor.A most enjoyable read. mirky62
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Date: 1/2/2010 5:47:00 AM
I have a tree that in seven years has grown from a seed that blew and took root in my back yard . It is about 4 feet tall now, strong but a little bent just like yours - a testment of the will to live. It is an Oak. Wonderful touching writing here Laura. Thank you for sharing. Laine
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Date: 12/31/2009 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.
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Date: 12/29/2009 6:35:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem of the week on the Soup Laura.. great write.. enjoyed... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/29/2009 9:10:00 AM
Congrats on this selection. There's nothing like good roots. Love, daver
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Date: 12/29/2009 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Laura. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 3:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week Laura, Happy New Year >> James,xx
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Date: 12/28/2009 12:32:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this new year week Laura.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/27/2009 1:40:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification for an interesting view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Happy New Year! Karen
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