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The Lock

Sometimes the lock, is locked without a key There seems to be no open doors to see So many things tried, so many things failed The mind longs to return, to where it sailed In easier times, life led by the sail With soft wind of comfort, even when frail Where is love, when it is needed most? When hope is dismissed by some sort of ghost? Once again, the pen comes to the rescue When the options left, are only a few Heidi Sands 5/14/19

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Date: 5/26/2019 12:02:00 PM
Hello Heidi, it is said when a door closes, another door opens. You must wait for the open door. have a nice day my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/26/2019 12:09:00 PM
Hi Darlene. Thank you for your kind comment and reminder. It is tough when all doors are closing at once, different directions.. ,,waiting for the right one to open :)
Date: 5/25/2019 12:36:00 AM
You sound really flat my friend - the door will open, just think and see and hope and mostly need it to, and I feel almost sure it will open - don't give up - open your heart and soul to it first, that alone will work the magic for you! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2019 10:14:00 AM
Thank you for your kind, encouraging comment! I appreciate it!. Have a nice day. :)
Date: 5/15/2019 6:01:00 AM
A melancholy write Heidi...Hope the lock will be opened soon...best wishes
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2019 7:31:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 5/15/2019 12:15:00 AM
Sometimes our lives feel that way Heidi, but somewhere and we have to look hard sometimes there is a key. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/15/2019 7:30:00 AM
True , Tom. Sometimes , it takes longer to find the key, but it is there. Have a nice day :)
Date: 5/14/2019 4:51:00 PM
A dialogue of tender sad feelings..very well depicted..it resonates.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/14/2019 4:54:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. Your support is always appreciated very much :)
Date: 5/14/2019 4:42:00 PM
Love those last four lines! I could make them my mantra some days.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/14/2019 4:46:00 PM
Thank you Sunlite! I understand completely. Have a nice evening :)

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