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The Light Is Yours .....Path of Peace

from depths, do not breathe- caress your thoughts in rhythm with the breaking waves, yellow daisies know- they do not hide from darkness, light finds them in time- sit still through the storm, your heart finds light, if you ask- others will join you! the daisy will bloom! peace will flow beyond the sun flow....beyond the sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/17/2009 2:23:00 PM
very uplifting! Light & Love
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Date: 9/13/2009 11:22:00 AM
Nicely done. I like the third and fourth lines especially. Sara
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Date: 8/17/2009 9:03:00 PM
Your words "flow", James, I find light in them...Karla
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Date: 8/17/2009 6:40:00 PM
Welcome back James, The heart will find light, if you ask, definately like that, welcome your comments, sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/17/2009 7:39:00 AM
Good morning James and welcome back. Hope your time away brought you pleasure x10 with your family.. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2009 7:31:00 AM
James a very beautiful Choka my friend - Thank you for your comments and I do hope that your camping trip went wonderfully - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:12:00 AM
Wonderful piece Jimbo...good to see your work again.
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Date: 8/17/2009 12:11:00 AM
Excellent thoughts Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 8/16/2009 11:22:00 PM
peace will flow beyong the sun--let peace be forever,,,,,,,,,,,beautiful write and recomment Jim,its great for your kids to enjoy your company ,you re a blessed family....and yeah i would have loved to watch that scenery...i love all type of adventures and camping is one of them,isect repellent always in my bag,mosquitos love me too much:)--charma
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Date: 8/16/2009 10:30:00 PM
This is truely a beautiful poem, good work James....Karla
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