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The Life He Wasted

a man of letters he came twenty yards of years ahead & raised the old lion of envy in many a soft & good heart of some peers – & a frozen pride was so near nearer than the flat nose on his calm & snake-oil face; ah! yond unmoving pride alcohol-inspired as he drank along some five yards of years with some new tuneful booms; old friends cast off like some dirt as wild smokers took the seats; & thus sadly our man of letters a man of pills he began a-groan upon a sad bed of stoke & pain a full ten yards of years ahead – the life he wasted with a knife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/10/2010 6:48:00 PM
People who cast off their friends often die sadly. Did he take his own life with that knife? Your descriptions of this event are out of this world! Awesome writing. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/10/2010 2:00:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Canny and enjoyed the poem Deb honored us with.. a nice one.. with luv..
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