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The dog’s bark alerts you to the mail and you rush to the door heart in hand. For you’re hoping you'll get a letter nervously twirling your wedding band. The envelope wafts a hint of musk that transports you back to his parting. And the fight you had... “Why reenlist?” you had argued, acid tears smarting. Your heart's pounding in trepidation and fueling anxiety's climb. Yet both the anger and flow of tears have decreased with the passage of time. Reading his letter a smile appears joined by more as his words set them free. For inked by a soldier in Iraq a man in pain pens a heartfelt plea. Sorrowful feelings flow from the page weeping and beautifully expressed. And yet in the depths of your being you’re still hurting and feeling depressed. You devour every sweet nuance penned each succulent slice of candied hope. And though time's something you can’t turn back borrowing his strength you try to cope. Yesterday a letter trimmed in black brought news you dreaded getting for years. For it said he'd been “killed in action" its typed message smeared...In pools of tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/23/2018 10:26:00 PM
O precious life! Well penned, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/24/2018 6:58:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/13/2017 11:29:00 AM
This rips me apart - especially touching in the light of current events!
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Date: 4/13/2017 4:12:00 PM
Thanks Sunlite, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 4/13/2017 11:25:00 AM
An urgent message here in this poem for all to see and that is never end a day or an encounter in anger. Always settle a disagreement Before parting ways and there will never be any regrets.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/13/2017 4:12:00 PM
Thanks Edward, it's easy to say but very hard to do when emotions are involved, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 4/11/2017 11:30:00 PM
Wow, Emile, you got me with this one.
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Date: 4/12/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thank you Doug, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 4/11/2017 9:50:00 PM
Deep and Sad... So many emotions in a single poem... Beautifully penned... Great job... A big 7...
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Date: 4/12/2017 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Supraja, your comments and support are appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/11/2017 2:49:00 PM
Your words take us through a wide range of emotions from anticipation right through to a realized dread I would wish on no one. A wonderfully crafted poem bursting with emotion. Very nicely done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/11/2017 5:36:00 PM
Thank you Lyn, I appreciate your wonderful comments and support. Emile.
Date: 4/11/2017 12:00:00 PM
Oh how sad Emile, powerful write. 7 xomo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/11/2017 12:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Maureen, as always your comments are welcomed and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/11/2017 10:51:00 AM
I had a feeling when I began reading this that the ending would be something dark and painful. You built up the joy and the missing nicely with the letter reaffirming love only to drop us off at the stop called reality. So very sad and something I know more have faced than I care to imagine.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/11/2017 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Chris, your comments are insightful and much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/11/2017 10:14:00 AM
So real and heartbreaking. Very well done Emile!
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Date: 4/11/2017 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 4/11/2017 10:10:00 AM
What a marvelous flashback technique, Emile. A piece filled with sorrow and remorse and trepidation. Well-done!
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Date: 4/11/2017 10:25:00 AM
Thank you Reason, your comments and support are must appreciated. Emile.

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