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December-  27- 2023
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The Lesson a Dog Taught Me

On a stone wall, by the solitary pavement, Annoyed and angry, with daggers drawn at everyone, I saw my neighbor sitting dejected and depressed. Though known him for years, of late he has changed much. His eyes had grown so cold, and his mind, so blank. His vision, I felt was blurred by a hazy mist. He was seen with his gaze fixed at the horizon far, Like a block of stone, hardly noticing anyone, he sat. From a distance, came a barking sound, It was from his dog that followed its master’s trail. Seeing a rodent, behind a wild bush The dog was barking nonstop on and on The mangy animal was once so loved, Now left wantonly uncared and unattended. With incessant bark it was disturbing the calm around. This greatly irked the man, otherwise annoyed. Instant was his response and rash, his action. Picking up a stone and aiming at the dog, He hurled the stone with all his might, And sad! It hit hard on his target. Oppressively hurt by the whizzing stone, The dog twitched and yelled in pain. Licking its wound, it ran round and round, Along the concrete path, mad and wild. At last, slowing down and turning its direction Towards its master, it moved fast. Petrified, on an impulse, he jumped down, And fearing the worst, he closed his eyes. But wagging its tail with a pleading look It began licking its master’s hand. The hand so rude that clutched the stone, And had flung at it, causing it to bleed. It was a gesture too deep for words, That taught the man the lesson of love: Love others with every broken piece Even after someone breaks one's heart. After years, it remains the best example Of forgiveness, I have ever seen and assimilated. It helps me forget all bitterness towards my enemies, Teaching me the lesson not to curse but to bless them. I feel it was a message sent down from Heaven, The most powerful of all sermons so far delivered. By forgiving our enemies, one can unload the baggage, And save our wretched lives from serious wreckage!
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Venkataraman Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:50 PM
Your poem is clear, understandable and tells the meaning with remarkable dexterity!
Venkataraman Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:49 PM
When Akbar ordered Birbal to bring the most ungrateful and the most grateful souls, Birbal was worried and his daughter on seeing his worried face asked him for the reason, he expressed and his daughter asked him to take his son-in-law for the most ungrateful and their dog for the most grateful and Akbar realized that he was also a son-in-law and patted Birbal by giving prizes for his wit and wisdom. Your poem is clear, understandable and tells the meaning with remarkable dexterity!
Venkataraman Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:48 PM
When Akbar ordered Birbal to bring the most ungrateful and the most grateful souls, Birbal was worried and his daughter on seeing his worried face asked him for the reason, he expressed and his daughter immediately asked him to take his son-in-law for the most ungrateful and their dog for the most grateful and Akbar realized that he was also a son-in-law and patted Birbal by giving prizes for his wit and wisdom. Your poem is clear, understandable and tells the meaning with remarkable dexterity!
Venkataraman Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:48 PM
When Akbar ordered Birbal to bring the most ungrateful and the most grateful souls, Birbal was worried and his daughter on seeing his worried face asked him for the reason, he expressed and his daughter immediately asked him to take his son-in-law for the most ungrateful and their dog for the most grateful and Akbar realized that he was also a son-in-law and patted Birbal by giving prizes for his wit and wisdom. Your poem is clear, understandable and tells the meaning with remarkable dexterity!
Volumes Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 3:13 AM
A wise poem, Valsa, wonderfully told. A lesson with an example that cannot be denied. Thank you sweet one.
La France Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 3:44 PM
Valsa, a beautiful poem, congratulation on your win in the contest. Constance
One Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 2:14 PM
Anyone can teach us a lesson..Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Alex Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 6:33 PM
"Love others with every broken piece Even after someone breaks one's heart" - Very beautifully written with a very concrete incident between the dog and its master. "By forgiving our enemies, one can unload the baggage, And save our wretched lives from serious wreckage!" - Solid truths. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful write/story/great ending again. Have a blessed day writing away........................
McBride  Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 10:24 AM
Beautiful soulful poem of the Love placed within these dogs and animals to break through many hearts that are cold to the world, sad really how mankind brings so much hatred to cause division, that many find more Love in their pets than humans, I love my dogs : ). And as well look what Jesus had to do just that we might inherit the promised spirit to bring this Love,peace and joy , within to share unto a world that needs it , Wishing you a wonderful new year
McBride  Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 10:35 AM
A song about a man's dog : )
McBride  Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 10:34 AM
https://youtu.be/iH-vfrIfzpA?feature=shared
Baker Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:40 PM
A FAV for my list, Valsa. What a beautiful lesson to learn from a dog. Great entry for the contest. Good luck! I can use this one myself. I can learn to be more loving to those that hurt and abuse me. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poetry with us. Have a great 2024! Bill & Sara Baker
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 2:42 PM
What wise words Valsa dear friend. It Is said tha a dog is mans best friend, and this story proves it. I'm glad the dog showed the grouchy ild man how to love snd forgive. From where you dont expect it, we can learn life and soul saving messages . Love your poem Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 2:42 PM
What wise words Valsa dear friend. It Is said tha a dog is mans best friend, and this story proves it. I'm glad the dog showed the grouchy ild man how to love snd forgive. From where you dont expect it, we can learn life and soul saving messages . Love your poem Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 2:42 PM
What wise words Valsa dear friend. It Is said tha a dog is mans best friend, and this story proves it. I'm glad the dog showed the grouchy ild man how to love snd forgive. From where you dont expect it, we can learn life and soul saving messages . Love your poem Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 2:42 PM
What wise words Valsa dear friend. It Is said tha a dog is mans best friend, and this story proves it. I'm glad the dog showed the grouchy ild man how to love snd forgive. From where you dont expect it, we can learn life and soul saving messages . Love your poem Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 2:42 PM
What wise words Valsa dear friend. It Is said tha a dog is mans best friend, and this story proves it. I'm glad the dog showed the grouchy ild man how to love snd forgive. From where you dont expect it, we can learn life and soul saving messages . Love your poem Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 2:42 PM
What wise words Valsa dear friend. It Is said tha a dog is mans best friend, and this story proves it. I'm glad the dog showed the grouchy ild man how to love snd forgive. From where you dont expect it, we can learn life and soul saving messages . Love your poem Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 2:42 PM
What wise words Valsa dear friend. It Is said tha a dog is mans best friend, and this story proves it. I'm glad the dog showed the grouchy ild man how to love snd forgive. From where you dont expect it, we can learn life and soul saving messages . Love your poem Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 2:41 PM
What wise words Valsa dear friend. It Is said tha a dog is mans best friend, and this story proves it. I'm glad the dog showed the grouchy ild man how to love snd forgive. From where you dont expect it, we can learn life and soul saving messages . Love your poem Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 2:41 PM
What wise words Valsa dear friend. It Is said tha a dog is mans best friend, and this story proves it. I'm glad the dog showed the grouchy ild man how to love snd forgive. From where you dont expect it, we can learn life and soul saving messages . Love your poem Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 2:40 PM
What wise words Valsa dear friend. It Is said tha a dog is mans best friend, and this story proves it. I'm glad the dog showed the grouchy ild man how to love snd forgive. From where you dont expect it, we can learn life and soul saving messages . Love your poem Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 2:39 PM
What wise words Valsa dear friend. It Is said tha a dog is mans best friend, and this story proves it. I'm glad the dog showed the grouchy ild man how to love snd forgive. From where you dont expect it, we can learn life and soul saving messages . Love your poem Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Proxenos Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 2:39 PM
What wise words Valsa dear friend. It Is said tha a dog is mans best friend, and this story proves it. I'm glad the dog showed the grouchy ild man how to love snd forgive. From where you dont expect it, we can learn life and soul saving messages . Love your poem Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Goldsmith Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 1:19 PM
I enjoyed reading your powerful write/story/great ending. Good Luck in the contest... "Happy New Year 2024" .................
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 9:15 AM
Most dogs are this way. Maybe the reason dog spelled backwards is God. I was curious to know if the cruel master mellowed out from the dog being so forgiving
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