The Legend

What is this that lurks in the dark?
It creeps and crawls through your wall
And slithers silently down the hall.

What is this that avoids the light?
The deep dark fear sets in
As silent fingers trace your skin.

What is this that has no form?
You wake up with a frozen scream,
And hope it was merely a dream.

What is this that stalks at night?
But the feeling of being watched stays,
Even as you see the sun’s first rays.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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George   Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 6:21 PM
I have had nights like that! Looking forward to reading more of your poetry, Jane. Elaine
Jane Avatar
May 18, 2017 at 5:16 AM
Thank you for reading, and taking time to leave a comment!
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Very mysterious, Jane!! Do you like being called Just Jane or Jane? It's a cute name!
Jane Avatar
May 18, 2017 at 5:16 AM
Hi! Thanx, I prefer Just Jane, but Jane is fine too. Always makes me thing of author Jane Austen.
Ricci Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Hello Jane. This is more than Free Verse. It is so aligned. It reads with flow. The rhyme well executed. This is an entry to be read out loud with emphasis. Honestly. You named this entry appropriately. Well done entirely.
Jane Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 5:00 AM
Thank you so much for your feedback. It is always great to hear that someone enjoyed reading your work. Thank you!
White Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 3:56 AM
I know that feeling, nights are difficult, aren't they? Stay safe.
Jane Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 5:31 AM
They definitely are... thanx!
Green Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 6:20 AM
Very deep and a little eerie. These feelings, unexplained and frightening I believe flow from the inside out.
Jane Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 5:33 AM
I believe you are right... thank you for your feedback!
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