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The Oak Leaf

The Oak Leaf Tenaciously upon its bough The wintered, withered leaf Sustains the Southern wind somehow Like breakers on a reef. Each naked limb...a syncopate... In "New Orleans Rag" time And time again to abdicate This clinging from its clime. Aloft, above, abreast a hive Of busy buzzing bees... The taste of honey brings alive A temporary tease; But in the distance, thunder shouts And lightning cracks the skies... The circ'ling West wind joins the South's As every leaf mound flies. Still sticks the withered leaf above Like honeyed toast...cohesing love. 2.25.2017©deborahburch Sonnet

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Date: 3/6/2017 11:13:00 AM
Great work, really inspiring and incredible.
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Date: 3/3/2017 10:36:00 AM
Elegant and well crafted - a +4 sonnet
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Date: 2/25/2017 8:30:00 PM
Lovely, Deborah! Loved the ending!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 2/26/2017 3:26:00 PM
:) thank you Kim!! Big Hugggs!! Deb
Date: 2/25/2017 7:25:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Deb. A very poetic observation:)
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Deborah Burch
Date: 2/26/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Daniel!! Big Hugggs!!:)
Date: 2/25/2017 6:23:00 PM
There is always one courageous one that never gives up. Enjoyed this very much.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 2/26/2017 3:25:00 PM
Thank you SW!! So true... Big Hugggs deb
Date: 2/25/2017 6:21:00 PM
wonderful! i love the very descriptive words you've used and your rhyme is spot-on, deborah...
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Deborah Burch
Date: 2/26/2017 3:24:00 PM
ilene!! Thank you so much!! Your encouragement is so rewarding!! :) big Hugggs deb.
Date: 2/25/2017 5:53:00 PM
Deb, this is an entrancing poem. What a great thought. : )
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Deborah Burch
Date: 2/26/2017 3:23:00 PM
Lol! Thank you Doug!! :) Big Hugggs!! Deb

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