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the last word of hunter

As I seize from greener pasture
Forgive me for taking away nature
lives have always been in vain
stopping them from breathing with pain
I toil never to hold my gun
with tears full of fun
The sleepless night became difficult
Because hunting was my cult
I regret taking away this joy of hunting
But not jolliness of killing
remembering the beautiful butterfly
and the choral singing of birds pass by
I never forget about the forest
even when I went to rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/22/2009 6:52:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/21/2009 10:28:00 AM
This is very impressive work. I especially like the last two lines. Congratulations on being featured. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/19/2009 1:59:00 AM
thanks very much to everyone, You are a source of encouragement.check out the part II
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Date: 8/18/2009 7:58:00 PM
Congrates On being featured this week .. Love Jayne :)
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Date: 8/18/2009 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 8/18/2009 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on having your wonderful poem featured this week, Aminkeng! I have a special love for the forest as well as a respect for hunting ... or not. I do love to photograph wild life. Your poem struck a deep place in my heart. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 8/17/2009 6:13:00 PM
Good use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/17/2009 2:40:00 PM
Very different write here and a well-deserved selection to be featured this week here at PoetrySoup. Congratulations, Aminkeng!
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Aminkeng. Love Carol
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