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The Last Vessel

There is a brush of wind sweeping roughshod over the shore Festering foamy white caps on the crest of the waves Disembodied voices I think I've heard before Are rising from the mist of the liquid haze White-feathered angel wings spreading wide and low Swoop down below the angry crimson wide Welcoming home the trollers, row by weary row As the beacon skims the waters, and the coming of the tide The sun is clinging helplessly, on the edges of the earth As one last vessel, trudges in, looking worn and spent Lagging far behind, and longing home and hearth Yet with sense of work well done, after long day's sweat, It burrows in, at end of day, from all those travels, far The one last vessel, weary worn, cuts a furrow in the stars For Francine's Contest :"On The Ocean Waves"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/9/2012 6:10:00 AM
A well deserved win for you. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2012 12:52:00 PM
Beauty and sketches start oozing from the very first line of this lovely write my friend. It was a joy to read this sweet and lovely write Carrie. Thank you for your precious comments on my new Poem and congratulations on your well deserving win. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Carrie Richards
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Date: 8/6/2012 8:18:00 AM
So wonderful sonnet you have penned. Congratulations for being the top winner in contests!
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Date: 8/5/2012 10:48:00 AM
A beautful sonnet, Carrie...I get such a peaceful feeling from this! Congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/4/2012 12:47:00 PM
love this beautiful sonnet, Carrie - wonderful descriptions. And congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 8/3/2012 1:27:00 PM
Wonderful, with a dreamy sense. Congrats! :) Tanya
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Date: 8/3/2012 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie xx
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