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Little friend I have tried my best Here in this cathedral of pines Too much red stain ... Too much of your warm blood Has run to melt the snow I have bound your wounds, tight and sure But it is too late, little friend Your face is white No more rose in your chin and nose No more warmth in your tiny hands As they grasp my arm, pleading. It was a hunter's bullet that found you, little friend In the woods to cut a tree, I heard it And followed your little prints Such a horrid mistake In such a glorious emerald forest And on the eve of the longest, dearest holiday There is no justice in life, little friend And my heart is so heavy ... so heavy For I could not find you in time And now your eyes find the truth of your fate in mine. How old must you be, little friend? I have heard the stories Passed to me from ancestors And I know all you have done to help me and mine For centuries ... Watching over us, protecting Doing chores in the night Saving our livestock Keeping us safe And with no thanks or recognition. But I tell you now, little friend I shall not forget you or your deeds Nor the sparkle in your eye, begging help And I will continue the tales, to my own You shall not be unremembered Your ivory beard and pointed cap Your funny little suit The furrows upon furrows of the centuries Etched in your leathery cheek And the soft melody of your voice Though I know not, the ancient dialect. I will place you here to rest Deep and safe among the towering evergreens And I shall honor you here Always ... Hold still, little friend ... it is not long now Do not struggle or strain your breath You are nearing your paradise now Rest your eyes and let go the concerns of this world Embrace the dreamless sleep Take my thanks and blessings with you to peace And those of my kin ... You have earned it well, little friend You have earned it ... well. ** NINTH PLACE in the "Alternative Festive Season" Poetry Contest, Kai Michael Neumann, Sponsor. **

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Date: 11/23/2017 7:57:00 AM
Amazing story, Greg:) I love the depth of your kindness portrayed here:)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/23/2017 8:10:00 AM
That's very kind of you to say, Jo, and I so appreciate it! Blessings and thanks, my friend! :-)
Date: 11/21/2017 4:16:00 PM
Gosh Greg!!!! This is just an amazing story told with love and empathy. Truly brought tears to my eyes. You are obviously a very kind soul. ~ Judy
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/23/2017 2:47:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Judy, you are always so kind with your comments, and I so appreciate them. Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/19/2017 12:25:00 PM
I cried and I'm okay with it. Such a tender and touching write, Gregory. All the best ... CayCay
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/20/2017 5:56:00 AM
I'm very pleased you enjoyed it, CayCay ... thank you so much! :-) <3
Date: 11/19/2017 9:47:00 AM
Splendid pen Greg! My best to you in the contest :) xomo!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/20/2017 5:58:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mo - this was a bit of a new direction for me, (I hope I spelled that right, lol). Blessings, Friend! ;-) <3
Date: 11/19/2017 8:05:00 AM
What a great poem for the contest ! It really reaches the reader and is so well written! :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/20/2017 6:00:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Heidi - I'm glad you liked my little story! :-) <3

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