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The Last Night of October

The last Night of October It's that time, again, the last night of October, the last glow of twilight nearly gone. Children race out and about, winding through the streets and alleys. Brightly colored costumes, mom's old wig, dad's old sport coat. All hoping to fill their bags with the prize: Candy bars, bag of licorice, candy corn, pop corn balls, apples, Bit-O-Honey, and Pez dispensed joy. Some, their favorites, to greedily keep their own, others to give to a poor sibling, who stayed home with the mumps. With faces painted, steel themselves, for the gauntlet ahead, the familiar street now somehow strange in the gloom, to walk past hallowed ground, All was quiet, save for the rustling of the leaves. The daylight gone, now cloaked in Stygian darkness.., ahead lie, the old grave yard. Raucous laughter, which echoed only moments before, trailed off into whispered murmurs. All eyes from the once merry band looked now, to their leader, albeit quickly chosen, the tallest, and oldest, and bravest. He too, resolve waning, felt the grip of those things unknown, in the shadowy mist, heart now beating faster, he chides the little ones, for being such silly ninnies. Just now, what was that! What was that sound?!? Was that an owl? Or, maybe Old Man Godfrey, come back from his now disturbed rest! Young sister's hands clasped brother's, tightly, and brother's, impishly taking the clammy worts, decidedly grew, just a bit older, wiser, and braver in kind. Now turning the corner at Elm street, they walked at even pace. With heads bowed low, mid-block, each chanced a glance, only to look away, from the wrought iron gate. Young heads, did now envision mystic spectres, ghouls and fantastic phantoms, with jaws agape, smiling in toothy cheer, bony fingered hands reaching through the heavy bars. Swallowing dryly, daring just one quick glance back, at the narrow lane winding, into the stone covered grounds, dotted with ivy covered trees of willow and oak. Back into the world of the living, back to All Hallow's Eve. -Happy Halloween

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Date: 12/13/2019 6:09:00 PM
Richard, this is very nice descriptive writing on a walk past a graveyard! you added just the right element of fear into it and then ended it on a light and happy note. Great job!
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Date: 12/13/2019 6:06:00 PM
Finally I hit on one I have not read . Ok, to read it now!!!
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Date: 10/20/2019 1:30:00 PM
You’ve definitely captured Halloween for me with your eerie imagery. I’m in the mood for a few spirits now ;-) x
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Date: 4/2/2019 12:39:00 PM
I enjoyed it. I love poems about holidays. I even learned a new word, stygian.
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Date: 12/8/2018 6:55:00 PM
Hello Quoth The Raven, this is a wonderful Halloween poem. The children enjoy this evening of going door to door for candy treats. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 10/31/2018 4:07:00 PM
Excellent story telling! I felt like a scared little kid. Happy Halloween!
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 10/31/2018 8:37:00 PM
Happy Halloween P.S.!! -Richard
Date: 10/31/2018 4:07:00 PM
A vivid description of a child's view of Halloween night and its scary features spread across lawns, doorways and in trees. Brought me back to the 60's and trick or treat nights we went on. A fav.. a very fine piece to read this Halloween.
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Date: 10/31/2018 8:38:00 PM
Happy Halloween Robert! -Richard
Date: 10/31/2018 12:02:00 PM
A wonderful poem that puts one in the right spirit of Halloween ! Well done dear, Quoth TheRaven!
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Date: 10/31/2018 8:55:00 AM
This is great, I am now in a Halloween state of mind. ;0)
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Date: 10/31/2018 8:41:00 PM
Happy Halloween Richard! -Richard
Date: 10/31/2018 8:27:00 AM
This is so well creatively written. Excellent ! :)
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Date: 10/31/2018 8:41:00 PM
Happy Halloween Heidi! -Richard
Date: 10/31/2018 6:38:00 AM
Every minute detail of the Halloween night adorns your poem..wandering the street..kids having fun..moments well captured. Happy Halloween, Quoth.
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Date: 10/31/2018 9:17:00 PM
Happy Halloween Vijay! -Richard
Date: 10/31/2018 12:42:00 AM
This poem is so Poe-like, for the first time, I understand your name. Which seemed vaguely familiar before, however, with this beautiful write, I have to say that Poe is your muse, and happily smiling at what a wonderful job you have done here. Your imagery and adjectives jump at the reader in the most frightening ways of all. Reminds me of all my childhood scares including Vincent Price movies.
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Date: 10/31/2018 9:17:00 PM
Happy Halloween Caren! -Richard

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