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The Last Line

i wish my dreams had been much bigger brighter Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~SUNLIT RIPPLES~ 2019 AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on December 25, 2018 for THE LAST LINE POETRY CONTEST sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 2ND

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2018 1:11:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win :) - Best wishes for the new year, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/30/2018 7:30:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/29/2018 3:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/29/2018 7:04:00 PM

Thanks, Michelle. Much appreciated.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/29/2018 8:32:00 AM

Hi Line, Many can relate to this well written one-liner. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/29/2018 7:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Alexis.

Silent One

Date: 12/29/2018 6:46:00 AM

If only... Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/29/2018 7:07:00 PM

Thank you, SO. Great contest.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/26/2018 9:02:00 PM

There was a time in my life that I had some much dreams... now I am sleeping too much ...

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2018 9:10:00 PM

LOL rest up, Pashang. You never know when passion will stir up and you'll need all your energy you can muster.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 12/26/2018 5:51:00 PM

love this one, very thought provoking

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2018 9:11:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/26/2018 5:04:00 PM

This is both brave and wistful, well-penned!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2018 9:11:00 PM

Thanks, Michelle. Most appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/26/2018 10:36:00 AM

Wow! Profound!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2018 2:00:00 PM

I'll never tire of saying that one of the reasons I love short forms is how the reader can fill in the blanks and really get the depth, add to the depth or totally take it into a new direction. Thanks for your most appreciated visit, Kim.

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/26/2018 2:26:00 AM

It's my prayer that the Lord will grant your wish, especially that it is a blessing to others. Thanks for sharing your talent, and for constantly uplifting your fellow poets. God bless you.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2018 7:38:00 AM

Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and compliment and blessing.