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The Last Leaf

The last leaf And there it is....the last leaf Stubborn, brave Holding tight to that branch Refusing to be the last memory. It’s colours are fading Becoming brown and gray and black Tattered and torn By the determined breeze By cold rain and crispy frost. All the other leaves are on the ground Said their goodbyes to the tree Carpeting the pavement, grass And ground under the paling sun. But not our little leaf, Refusing to become The last memory of summer past. But the gale is stronger With a big blow sends our little leaf On the ground, in the mud Soggy, forgotten Tattered, torn, brave little leaf. (13/10/2013)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/2/2014 10:40:00 PM
I like it...to me you are writing about nature and the last left before the carpet of snow erasing the past season getting ready for the nativity of Spring :)
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Angela Johnston
Date: 9/3/2014 2:34:00 AM
Exactly Ed, thank you :)
Date: 9/2/2014 4:58:00 PM
I 'm sorry guys, I must disapoint you, death was the last thing in my mind when I wrote this poem. I was contemplating on a lonely leaf still hanging on stubbornly on a branch while was having walk. As for the need to vent part, try kneading bread by your hands, very therapeutic, and at the end of the day you will have lovely loaf of bread. No offence, thank you for the nice words, and warm welcome. :) I'll check out your poems, thank you for the invitation :)
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Date: 9/2/2014 4:38:00 PM
What the lyric man said. This much as a child would think about death. Don't get me wrong - children are wonderfully sensitive people. Good stuff. daver
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