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The Last Hurrah

Cars line the curb - last hurrahs, the last of pseudo praises, or as Mom would say in the midst of a eulogy "Do I know this person"? Praises never thought of while life strode so proudly blind. As the bumble bounces on the hydrangea, sadly, other blossoms are forgotten while the most proud was overappreciated. How many days/years until my blossom is forgotten - left to pink and wither in winter's shadow then pale and blown away before spring knows it's missing ...or even cares. I'd much rather a fist raised in anger and celebration "The bastard's finally dead!" - Not a whisper when parting, "You got a tee time for Monday?" The cars line the curb, yet will they leave simply thankful they came "for the family" or will they give a damn … pause and say "I will miss him".

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Date: 12/4/2023 5:15:00 AM
Brilliant Craig - it's an emotive subject and yet life goes on. I'm so against being the sum of my interests that I'm loath to even declare them in life, let alone have them quoted as my essence of being. I read another poets take of 'he lived in the spoken words of another'. There are members of my family tree I obviously never met but their descendants kept them larger than life. Again even in life existing through your impact seems the greatest legacy. Enjoyed this
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Date: 9/13/2018 1:51:00 PM
I can feel the truth of this in every direction, Craig, and it is good.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 9/13/2018 2:37:00 PM
Very kind Caren, thank you.

Book: Shattered Sighs