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The Last Candle

It's her birthday they took her out for prime rib bar hopping now they've stumbled into the only place in town without a closing time Now she's doing shots with a couple locals who are buying...investing... She leaves a pair of pink lips after every birthday shot reminding them in slur-speak that its her birthday.. "oh is that so" they say in unison as if they've heard it for the first time". ...somewhere between midnight and regret the last candle flamed out on the cake.

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