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The Lapping Tide

This is nourishing, redemptive; we become less alone inside.
-David Foster Wallace 

Walking through a delirium,
I was tired.
The sand felt like purgatory,
A rising incline into a forever
That my mind numbed against.
I was awash of intentions, thought, even interest.
I had, in short, nothing left.

Then the pillars came into view.
As if begging for a story, a reason for being,
I was pulled, staggeringly, as if reeled from a
Fishing line to those salted gray walls,
The shards of church windows poking out of weathered frames.
What is that felt echo? St. Ignatius? The Archange? Michael? My brother?
I am so empty.

I sat down on the stone to rest the non-feeling.
The tide lapping into my mind.
I wanted none of it.
But there it was, anyway.
Persistent. Maddening. Life-giving.

*Matt Caliri
*The Church By The Ocean
*9/29/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 10:28 PM
Enjoyed this deep write, Matt. Congratulations on your very fine win. Love, Annalise
Merryman Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 9:37 PM
Congrats on your win, Matt! Kim
Johnson Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 8:10 PM
A great entry. Congratulations Matt. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Congrats Matt on a wonderful exciting win in this contest with brilliant lines of poetic art luv..
Quigley Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 10:45 AM
Nicely written Matt. Congratulations
Lane Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 8:27 AM
Not too shabby. Good for you.
Song Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 5:41 AM
Matt-this is a true prize-winner here....so many great lines. My favorites are the sand feeling like purgatory...awash of intentions...the shards poking out of weathered frames...u painted with words to well, I felt as tho I was standing there feeling hopeless and yet beckoned by the echoes too. Superb...chilling spiritual write. Gwendolen
Song Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 5:42 AM
*my spelling is horrid as I type faster than the brain will allow....*too well
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2011 at 1:45 PM
Congratulations on your win Matt in "The Church By The Ocean" contest. Love, Carol
La France Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:10 AM
Beautiful Matt, I am sending you a soupmail~~
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