The Language of Silence

We don't talk about it, I was mutely told,
Schooled in your nonverbal narcissism, I Attest
I became a linguist in the language of silence;

The tightened line of your mouth when a speck
of childhood play leaked through the Aperture 
of your wall of control; the Nuance of your slit eyes,
the stiffness of your shoulders when I disturbed.

The famine of your brevity, starkly juxtaposed with
the Proclivity of your friendly words for the neighbors;
Your perfunctory weak praise, more to lessen your guilt
than lift my esteem.

Even as I write this Saga under the weight of betrayal
nearly undone by our mutual oath of avoidance, and
after decades of delay, you have the Temerity to now
charge me with building the distance, keeping the barricade.

I am bluntly surprised, by your surprise; to accuse me of
this Barren contact, is to blame the clay for the cracks
in the hands that molded it.

And you dare say, why am I this way?
When I inherited the Marrow from you-

10/27/18

for John Hamilton's Eight Word Challenge contest
required words: Aperture, Attest, Barren, Temerity, Saga, Proclivity, Nuance, Marrow.
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Roper Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:30 AM
Michelle, I enjoyed reading and great way of the use of the 8 words .. Congratulations on your 1st place win.
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November 30, 2018 at 8:27 PM
Very emotionally powerful, Michelle, and so well-written. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Brilliant! Imaginative! A truly worthy podium winner, Michelle! Outstanding... Season's Best, Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Thank you, always encouraged by your wonderful comments!
Radke Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Excellent, excellent writing. I found myself relating to the emotions you so vividly expressed in this poem. I almost felt as though you were writing of me. Proof of an outstanding piece of work. Congratulations on your winning placement. This will go among my favorite poems. Best wishes. Deb
Faulkner Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 3:23 PM
I am so flattered by your lovely comments, Deb, thank you so much!
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November 28, 2018 at 7:23 AM
Wow! Kick ass poem dear. ..."is to blame the clay for the cracks..." brilliant. Congratulations on your top win! xomo
Faulkner Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 3:25 PM
Thanks, Maureen - I am so glad you like the clay line!
Barden Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:06 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Michelle - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
Faulkner Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Thank you so much, happy holidays to you also!
Warrior Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Back to Congrats!! my friend on an excellent win...with this superb entry...love & light...^WW^
Faulkner Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Much appreciate your kind words, thank you!
Watson Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 4:49 PM
An incredibly powerful and hopefully fictional write. The intensity of feeling and ease with which you have weaved the compulsory words in is excellent,Michelle.
Faulkner Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 11:05 PM
Well, it was inspired by true events, but very grateful for your kind comments, Wendy!
Hamilton Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Amazing use of the required words Michelle, a testimony to your acumen! Congrats on an excellent shared win!
Faulkner Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 11:06 PM
Thank you for placing me in your contest, very flattered!
Cornish Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Masterful use of the prompt Michelle, be very proud of your art here.
Faulkner Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Thank you for your kind words, craig!
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 12:01 AM
Wowsa! A FAVE. Awesome, Michelle.
Faulkner Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Appreciate that, thank you so much, Line!
Kiser Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 9:32 AM
Very well done; great story; best of luck in the contest.
Faulkner Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 2:30 PM
Thank you so much, M.L!
Warrior Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Superbly done my friend...ready for a win...love & light...^WW^
Faulkner Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 2:30 PM
Much thanks for your encouraging comment, WW!
Vaso Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 6:21 AM
This is so sad, it goes to show no one should listen To the lanquage of Silence
Faulkner Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 2:30 PM
That is very insightful, thank you, arthur!
Mcferran Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 9:27 PM
Brilliant work, Michelle! ;) This is so powerful, and evocative of a manipulative relationship... just, wow.
Mcferran Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 1:12 PM
That sounds like my father, too...
Faulkner Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 11:36 PM
Yes this came from a few years ago when my father asked why I didn't call him more - I said 'Well you don't call me, either" still surprised by that-
Wolf Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 8:53 PM
Well-crafted entry for the contest, Michelle. Intriguing title and content/message. Best wishes, Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 11:34 PM
Thank you so much as always!
Leiser Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 6:28 PM
Amazing intensity in this superb poem, Michelle! Excellent and thought provoking...best of luck in the contest :)
Faulkner Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 11:33 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Laura-
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October 27, 2018 at 3:57 PM
I kept thinking "there is no way Michelle can throw in Marrow here, how is she going to do it?" My hat is off to you,and the plume of a white feather is sweeping the floor as I bow to you, Maestro! You have mastered this contest!
Faulkner Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 11:32 PM
Thanks, Caren - it was actually harder to use "aperture' and 'proclivity'!
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