The Lake

Dawn, asleep at this hour
Chilled air is a gift
in the grip of summer


Landscape’s fresh silence
Moon, half blind
The traveling breeze
is a caravan


‘Come, naked and shivering, 
says Lake, 
dig through the mud for that
which is Truth, where the moon
inters her light, where bullfrogs
bark in circles’


The water
Lover, formless womb
ovulated by sunrise
I set the canoe in motion 


Orange dragonflies, murmuring duckbills 
fist-sized tadpoles, radiant finch 
gesticulate above and beneath surface
Green reeds are light tendrils

 
Sky’s blue inks a mallard’s back
A raven’s croak is more alive
than most people
Mist drops while rising
The canoe glides
water laps, gasps


The poised presence of an osprey
circling
Everything silences, stills
except for the canoe
over the Lake’s belly


The sun, pinned to the tip
of a redwood
reflects like an eye in chrome
I lie back and float, 
a water blossom’s thirst

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From my sixth book-length ms.
©dah / dahlusion 2014 / 2015
all rights reserved

“The Lake” was first published in
‘Black Market Re-View' (U.K.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Neumann Avatar
July 24, 2016 at 9:26 AM
'Bullfrogs barking in circle' and half blind moon'. Your Lake is like a lover. That is very good imagery.
Dahlusion Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Thank you, Kai! –-))
Roper Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 10:18 PM
Great write, Dah!
Dahlusion Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 10:39 AM
Thank you!
Hicks Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Wow, the picture you paint is teeming with life. "A raven's croak is more alive than most people" << Evocative image. Third and fifth stanzas were my favorite. Good personification and I really liked those orange dragonflies. Well written.
Dahlusion Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 10:39 AM
Thank you!
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