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The Lake

Dawn, asleep at this hour Chilled air is a gift in the grip of summer Landscape’s fresh silence Moon, half blind The traveling breeze is a caravan ‘Come, naked and shivering, says Lake, dig through the mud for that which is Truth, where the moon inters her light, where bullfrogs bark in circles’ The water Lover, formless womb ovulated by sunrise I set the canoe in motion Orange dragonflies, murmuring duckbills fist-sized tadpoles, radiant finch gesticulate above and beneath surface Green reeds are light tendrils Sky’s blue inks a mallard’s back A raven’s croak is more alive than most people Mist drops while rising The canoe glides water laps, gasps The poised presence of an osprey circling Everything silences, stills except for the canoe over the Lake’s belly The sun, pinned to the tip of a redwood reflects like an eye in chrome I lie back and float, a water blossom’s thirst ---------------------------------------- From my sixth book-length ms. ©dah / dahlusion 2014 / 2015 all rights reserved “The Lake” was first published in ‘Black Market Re-View' (U.K.)

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Date: 7/24/2016 9:26:00 AM
'Bullfrogs barking in circle' and half blind moon'. Your Lake is like a lover. That is very good imagery.
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Dah Dahlusion
Date: 8/7/2016 11:56:00 AM
Thank you, Kai! –-))
Date: 2/22/2016 10:18:00 PM
Great write, Dah!
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Dah Dahlusion
Date: 2/23/2016 10:39:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/22/2016 3:52:00 PM
Wow, the picture you paint is teeming with life. "A raven's croak is more alive than most people" << Evocative image. Third and fifth stanzas were my favorite. Good personification and I really liked those orange dragonflies. Well written.
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Dah Dahlusion
Date: 2/23/2016 10:39:00 AM
Thank you!

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