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August-1- 2024
A Fenny Summer Lomerick Poerty Contest
Sponsor- Tania Kitchin
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The Ladybug and the Cat


On a tree, lived a ladybug named Sue She wore a red frock with dots of teal blue In summer she came with grace She roamed through my garden's space A cat caught and ate her with a loud chew.
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Date: 8/30/2024 12:08:00 PM
Oh no! Such a happy, upbeat rhyme then it takes a tragic turn. This is really good! Love it xo
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Date: 8/19/2024 1:52:00 PM
Back with congrats, dear poet
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Date: 8/18/2024 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your Limerick write with cute pictures. Poor little ladybug. Have a fun day writing away....................
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Date: 8/18/2024 9:05:00 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and clever limerick.
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Date: 8/6/2024 11:57:00 PM
Oh no! lol poor lady bug! Good limerick! Best wishes for the contest!
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Date: 8/6/2024 7:51:00 AM
Hi my dear friend - l love your poem and wish you loads of luck in Tania's contest. Felt sorry for the lady bug, but predators have a knack of winning, However loved your ginger kitten even if it had only recently being taught by mummy how a tasty treat is caught and was a tad naughty. Love and hugs dear Valsa, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/2/2024 9:19:00 PM
A nice poem about Cat the Ripper. It's sad the ladybug died, but worry not, they don't live too long anyway. It made me laugh and smile.
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Date: 8/2/2024 7:16:00 AM
The laws of the jungle reign supreme, the poor bug was at the bottom of the food chain. Enjoy your weekend Valsa. I'm back from travelling again, for now. Tom
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Date: 8/2/2024 12:32:00 AM
cats are cruel, delicious poetry to be shared with cats, i guess ??? enjoyed
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Date: 8/1/2024 7:51:00 PM
Ladybug just needed a hug... But the cat did not understand that...
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Date: 8/1/2024 2:59:00 PM
Oh no thats sad but i must say you have a storyteller within you sweet valsa, and i think i did say this to you before, i see a children’s storyteller through your writes and you do it very creatively and descriptively, in such elegance. And even in the form of limerick youv delivered one that is very touching and beautiful with excellent rhymes. Love the pic used too. I love your poetic skills! This limerick is cute and adorable! And so well articulated! Sending you light. Best wishes always
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Date: 8/1/2024 1:24:00 PM
Awww poor ladybug! Great idea for this contest dear Valsa..
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Date: 8/1/2024 12:50:00 PM
oh my she got eaten up by a kitty cat. Poor thing. I love lady bugs!
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Date: 8/1/2024 9:27:00 AM
Nice limerick.
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Date: 8/1/2024 5:33:00 AM
I wonder if Sue tasted like chicken? Not the the cat would have cared and right? Cute lim
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Date: 8/1/2024 2:59:00 PM
Haha chicken
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