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The Lady Down the Lane

The lady down the lane Kept daisies by her windowpane Clad in sun splashed coveralls Her hair, a silver waterfall Proudly she wore her bluebell bonnets As she composed her floral sonnets We would smile a shy hello Her name, I never got to know Now - dusty silence coats her stair The bones of color, stripped and bare Abandoned seedlings, parched segments So largely felt, those little dents A 'For Sale' sign sits on the lawn I guess seasons - and gardens - move on Yet, sometimes I see, through stained-glass rain Daises by her windowpane. 3/20/20 For 'The Lady Down the Lane' contest Sponsor: Craig Cornish

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Date: 3/31/2020 8:05:00 AM
Yet, sometimes I see, through stained-glass rain. Daises by her windowpane. Sometimes memories that we fondly remember are rarely what we expect. Your poem is a beautiful example of this. Your poem was indeed a delight. Congratulations on your well-deserved placement. JC Hawkens
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/31/2020 6:33:00 PM
Your comment is a delight to me, thank you!
Date: 3/30/2020 8:02:00 AM
That gave me goosebumps, "through stained-glass rain" just gorgeous. Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/30/2020 4:03:00 PM
What a great compliment, thank you Maureen!
Date: 3/29/2020 11:51:00 PM
This wonderful poem has an air of mystery about it Michelle. I loved it! Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/30/2020 4:02:00 PM
Much appreciate it, thank you, Connie
Date: 3/29/2020 3:12:00 PM
'Her hair, a silver waterfall' - what a beautiful line and the whole poem was a pleasure to read, Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/29/2020 6:54:00 PM
I am flattered, thank you for commenting, Wendy-
Date: 3/22/2020 8:09:00 PM
So beautiful! Great poem!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/29/2020 6:54:00 PM
Thank you, Mark
Date: 3/21/2020 10:50:00 PM
So touching. Everything about it so literarily infused. Love it, Michelle! :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/21/2020 11:20:00 PM
I am touched you like it, gw!
Date: 3/21/2020 1:01:00 PM
This poem is a treat to read Michelle, a cute poem about the Lady Down the Lane. Sad as she is gone but your beautiful imagery is remarkable! best wishes my friend - Blessings Jennifer.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/21/2020 11:22:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Jennifer, hope you and your family are all OK.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/21/2020 1:02:00 PM
Be well and safe! xxx
Date: 3/20/2020 9:16:00 PM
such a beautiful vivid write...I could picture her and the scene... wonderful ending lines.... best wishes in the contest! hugs and blessings
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/21/2020 11:21:00 PM
Much appreciate it, Sandra-
Date: 3/20/2020 2:00:00 PM
- Beautifully written, Michelle :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a nice and safe weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/20/2020 3:05:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, stay safe!
Date: 3/20/2020 1:39:00 PM
Nice one...Mrs. Silver Waterfall is gone, but through the rain you can see fresh daises by her windowpane
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/20/2020 3:04:00 PM
Thank you for commenting, Arturo-
Date: 3/20/2020 1:10:00 PM
Well scribed! It so aptly describes old Lizzie Gale who lived down our lane! Aloha! Rico
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/20/2020 3:03:00 PM
Glad it reminds you of your neighbor - thanks for commenting!

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